I've read this one a few times now and haven't reviewed. Although it's creepy I love it. It's Shepwhump, so naturally I'm going to love it. I look forward to reading more of your work.

I agree it's a creepy story. Like having a big tapeworm in him. I'd freak out myself it happened to me. I don't like bugs either.

Great read!

Great story. Love the ending dialog between Carson and John. Well done!

Wow, poor John! Your amazingly detailed writing made me almost feel that worm crawling under my skin ;) Loved the last lines too.

Wonderful story! Thank you!

This is more lome a general letter. I have spent the last two days reading your fan fiction(Thoughrcrimes and Stargate Alantis.) I really liked this story(Parasite.) Although the worm was yucky- it didn't make me cringe or get sick. I must confess to reading a large amt of your fan fiction. I love the way you write. I too do not like slash either. I also don't like torture or mental cruelty. You do both well but I have to admit I can't always start or finish those kinds of stories. The thought of continually torturing or mentally breaking John Shepard is really disturbing to me.

My sister and I happily discovered Sherbert yesterday. We just love that creature and his interaction with Shepard. Love it, love it, love it. "Please, some more?"

anyway thanks for your clever stories. Keep writing about our favorite people.

Skye

Wonderfully detailed and creepy! :)

Oh, my god, I would totally have freaked out if something was under my skin like that. Awesome story, really in character; and I ADORE the ending, way to end it on a comic note.

Great story! Thanks for sharing with me. You were right, it made me feel like something was crawling on me. In fact, I hit my thigh so hard almost left a mark (LOL). Gross!

euh, that was just SO gross...

*shuddering*

Ah. You always provide the very best whump. You were right in your intro. This one genuinely did make me squirm, and I think I would have done the same thing had I discovered it. Though, after calling Carson, I wouldn't have stopped trying to grab it, which is why I would never survive in the Pegasus Galaxy.

Heh. I've read so many of your stories I'm starting to see a trend. It's always John, he always has a breakdown (Eat your heart out, Jow Flannigan!), always loses weight, Rodney says "freakin'" a lot, and Carson says 'Bloody' a lot. Though this one didn't have the same level of psychological trauma, though there undeniably was some. Sheesh... maybe I should lay off.

Great story! Really creepy though, I'm now trying to stop myself checking my back in the mirror! Nice character interactions too, especially the end between Carson and John. Good job!

N x

I knew I shouldn't have read this story, I knew it... Now I'm not sure I'll be able to sleep this night (I'm easily impressive )

Thanx anyway for this (horrible, terrible) story!

Enjoyed it so. Thanks!

I loved this! And when John figured out what was going on, OMG, I can imagine how freaked he must've been, yikes! Wonderful story, thank you!