I LOVED it, this story was amazing please write a sequel on Jack's life x

Loved the story although it would have been better if Rose and the Doctor had gotten married (and I skipped the rude bits lol).

Good so far, really enjoying it, but if it is 9 months later then the baby would be 3 months old.

What a beautiful story. Isn't it just the way we all would love to see it end. The doctor rose and their children. Sigh. Thanks for a great read.

i absolutely adored this story! it was amazing, great job!

Oh bravo! *Clap clap clap* This fic was amazing! Isn't there a sequel about somehwere? Must check it out tomorrow...need sleep. Not to mention the fact I'm freezing cold.

Thanks for writing this! A fine way to kill an hour or two :D

O you got me scared there. I thought you were just going to dangle the opportunity infront of me then take their reunion away! What's gonna happen with Martha? Must read!

I just remembered what I was gonna say! On Bad Wolf Bay you said she'd been pregnant for three months, then you said 'nine months later' though that may just be me being delusional and not reading right. Oh well. Yes, he's back! Did I say how much I love this fic? :D

Yes! This is brilliant! I should probably go to bed right now but I love this!

TAKE HER BACK ALREADY! AGH! *Rips hair out*

Yes! He'll take her back to the parallel world, won't he? To find himself? I love you! :D Wow, I'm seriously hooked.

Christ you had me there. I got REALLY confused. At the line:

'“You’re not the Doctor,” Pete said, assessing the man before him. “You’re not him.”' I thought he'd regenerated which I would've REALLY hated, then at the line:

'He briefly glanced at her with no hint of recognition in his eyes before he went back to addressing the others before him.' I thought it was perhaps a parallel version of the Doctor that existed on that world, which made me sighed relief he had regenerated and then FINALLY at:

'“He’s not the Doctor you know,” Rose managed to say, still looking at the Doctor before her. “He hasn’t regenerated yet.”' I realised it was the old Doctor who'd come along BEFORE he met Rose! Yay!

Still, here's hoping Ten comes back!

YEE-HAW! He's back! And with a VENGEANCE!

Oh wait, she's been pregnant twelve months? O, agony. *Reads on*

Short, and sweet. Now's about the time you reunite them :D Must read on!