Reviews for Chibi Drabbles |
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![]() ![]() ![]() #32 was my favorite. Hahaha! Poor Winry. She was just telling it like it was. I really like how well you paint the picture of the brothers, though. Making their lives seem so normal is such a sweet and yet terrible contrast to what their lives later become. Their being oblivious makes it so much worse, too. The last line of this one was really nice! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh these are so adorable! And so beautiful in their simplicity. You're a god, you really are. ._. Tears in my eyes from squealing so much. Dammit, why did they ever have to grow up? I think these little drabbles have made me realise yet again how cruel the end of innocence was for those poor kids. Thankyouthankyouthankyou, this is so gorgeous! 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() EW! that is gross! hahaha LOL |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in a long time. It gives the impression that I'm not reading anymore, when really I'm enjoying every chapter. Thank you so much for sharing these wonderful glimpses into FMA's childhood years. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Al ruffles up. "You do and I'll pound you!"" OMG that's the funniest line ever. Al is priceless. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aha, an excellent author! I knew there must have been one somewhere around here. These drabbles are great, the characters are completely accurate and well-developed. These stories actually seem like side-extensions to the real plot, unlike most fanfics. Both light and deep at the same time, this collection was very enjoyable to read, and I hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice, please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, I really like how the gossip was inserted into the rest of the narrative. Very good idea! You have a nice grip on Al, too. Everyone always makes him so gooshy. D: |
![]() ![]() ![]() There is not a single one of these that could use even the slightest of improvements. They are perfect and complete, each and every one of them. Bravo. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet, sweet justice. HeHe. Those kids are the cutest little things. I could just eat them up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() My first fic of the new year, and it really made me giggle. Yay for poetic justice. Hope you had a great holiday season. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe, this one made me giggle. :) Oh, and happy new year! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Edward Elric does not admit to fear! X'D Anyway, cute idea. I like the way their hometown is portrayed as distinctly unexciting to them from that angle. Neat that you used real research for the whole swing dealie. O: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, ouch... That was sort of bitter-sweet. I like the whole new layer you've added to my mental image of the tree. The image of the petals flying down in a storm of white is so pretty! The way you move ahead in the timeline so much at the end was a nice addition, too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ed seems to have a vengeful streak. |