Reviews for Chibi Drabbles |
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MilesTailsPrower-007 chapter 32 . 9/16/2009 #32 was my favorite. Hahaha! Poor Winry. She was just telling it like it was. I really like how well you paint the picture of the brothers, though. Making their lives seem so normal is such a sweet and yet terrible contrast to what their lives later become. Their being oblivious makes it so much worse, too. The last line of this one was really nice! |
Kibetha chapter 32 . 8/12/2009 Oh these are so adorable! And so beautiful in their simplicity. You're a god, you really are. ._. Tears in my eyes from squealing so much. Dammit, why did they ever have to grow up? I think these little drabbles have made me realise yet again how cruel the end of innocence was for those poor kids. Thankyouthankyouthankyou, this is so gorgeous! 3 |
DaRkNeSs4IcHi chapter 2 . 6/21/2009 EW! that is gross! hahaha LOL |
bubblygoo chapter 29 . 6/15/2009 I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in a long time. It gives the impression that I'm not reading anymore, when really I'm enjoying every chapter. Thank you so much for sharing these wonderful glimpses into FMA's childhood years. |
Legendary Chimera chapter 29 . 6/15/2009 "Al ruffles up. "You do and I'll pound you!"" OMG that's the funniest line ever. Al is priceless. |
Ink.Incorporated chapter 28 . 6/7/2009 Aha, an excellent author! I knew there must have been one somewhere around here. These drabbles are great, the characters are completely accurate and well-developed. These stories actually seem like side-extensions to the real plot, unlike most fanfics. Both light and deep at the same time, this collection was very enjoyable to read, and I hope you update soon! |
Vi-Violence chapter 28 . 5/29/2009 nice, please update soon |
MilesTailsPrower-007 chapter 28 . 3/10/2009 Oh, I really like how the gossip was inserted into the rest of the narrative. Very good idea! You have a nice grip on Al, too. Everyone always makes him so gooshy. D: |
treeflamingo chapter 27 . 3/8/2009 There is not a single one of these that could use even the slightest of improvements. They are perfect and complete, each and every one of them. Bravo. |
Citycept chapter 27 . 1/29/2009 Sweet, sweet justice. HeHe. Those kids are the cutest little things. I could just eat them up. |
Legendary Chimera chapter 27 . 1/1/2009 My first fic of the new year, and it really made me giggle. Yay for poetic justice. Hope you had a great holiday season. |
Syolen chapter 27 . 1/1/2009 Hehe, this one made me giggle. :) Oh, and happy new year! |
MilesTailsPrower-007 chapter 26 . 6/27/2008 Edward Elric does not admit to fear! X'D Anyway, cute idea. I like the way their hometown is portrayed as distinctly unexciting to them from that angle. Neat that you used real research for the whole swing dealie. O: |
MilesTailsPrower-007 chapter 25 . 4/22/2008 Ooh, ouch... That was sort of bitter-sweet. I like the whole new layer you've added to my mental image of the tree. The image of the petals flying down in a storm of white is so pretty! The way you move ahead in the timeline so much at the end was a nice addition, too. |
bubblygoo chapter 25 . 4/21/2008 Ed seems to have a vengeful streak. |