do you intend to update? a really wonderful beginning

That was sweet and perfecto, Thanks for this story...

you don't have to write a sex scene... but I'd love another chapter

something soft and sweet, about how they settle into life
nothing about kids or anything, nothing beyond a kiss
just how they grow together, shockingly peacefully, playfully, and purposefully

I wonder why this doesn't have a lot of reviews. I guess most of the people here on FFnet just read and never even bother leaving a review no matter how much they like the story.

I love this and I'm sad that there aren't a lot of people who write Ranma fanfics anymore. Unlike before. :( Hope you write more fanfics for this fandom.

cute. A really cute one piece.

oh, the sex part does fit in. *cheeky grin*

i think you're pretty good, far better than most, and you really ought write more.

your writing style is very engaging and i'm kinda atracted by it.

i really think you ought to update soon as you're so going on my fave autors list.

Aww, that was so cute! I was squealing happily the entire time I was reading it. And given the situation, I thought it was very realistic. If they did have a sort-of shotgun wedding, I could see their nightly conversation going almost exactly like this. _

Really lovely, and admirably, is without the sappiness typical of most confessions-of-feelings stories for these two characters.

Me like very much, thank you.

Beautiful. I really liked that. The only constructive criticism I can think of is that you might try to get someone to pre-read for you, if possible, in order to help catch little word choice problems like "his lungs constricting the breath out of his lungs."