when dose hinata come in this book.

Lol I love that you talk to the characters.

So what happens next?

OMFG. I was looking through all of my favorite authours and I saw your name. Your atory my pretty is the first story I have ever read on . Seriously THE first story. I love your story's especially the one I'm reviewing for. I almost read it all but then I found another really goodInuYasha story and well my attention was diverted. I love the little stuff you write before and after chapters. My favorite otaku story is probably the one where Koga stole your dog and you went of with your giant pencil to kick some serious wolf butt. Anyway I just wanted to review to thank you for presenting me with a well written Inu story as my first story. I enjoyed the chapter's immensely and am now going to read everyone of them again and review this time. Again thanks. X3

omg... I LOVE IT! PLZ COUNTINUE SOON!

Good chapter! I can't picture Kagome's mom doing what she did. Update soon!

-Inuyasha05

Aw man that was really funny. I couldn't stop laughing it was so much fun. The ramen shop was a cool part, but in a way I feel bad for Kagome since only her brother would believe that Kagome was one in the same. I think that for the Hideki factor I think that he should remain faithful to Aimi. From what I've read there are three major reasons that will help this answer become stronger, 1) he and Aimi are deeply in love, 2) Aimi has waited a long time to get him back and it wouldn't be fair to take him away from her again after all the time they lost, and 3)I think that Hideki should stay with Aimi so if Mirana does try to take him back Aimi could have a big scene where she gets angry again at the fact she thinks that she's about to lose the one she loves then in order to keep him from leaving she defeats Mirana in a battle. Then during the battle Hideki helps to calm her down by saying that he's not leaving and has always loved her, this gives Aimi the idea to change or summon Mirana's true mate. How about next time the group goes out they visit Jinenji or another of the groups old friends. I hope that you like the ideas and I can't wait to read what you come up with next so, Please Update Soon V

This was a cool chapter...I really liked it. Though I DO feel bad for Kagome, I'm glad you got Souta to help her out. I was going to ask you why I was unemployed, but then i remembered that I was still in the Fuedal Era with Kouga (How the Hell could I forget THAT!) May I make a request? If you decide to bring me back (soon I hope), can I be pregnant with Kouga's cub?

Um...what if something goes wrong with Aimi's pregnancy? Add a bit more drama to the story? But Mirana can't be with Hideki, he's mated to Aimi! Oh, well. That's up to you. Great job! Good luck! Ja!

tal this is great sry to review so late but i love it!

Brie

Good chapter! Update soon!

-Inuyasha05

Coolness. It's getting really interesting now. I wonder what madness would follow. _ Please update asap, okay? D

PS: By the way, I've noticed a few typos and grammatical errors in your story(not that my grammar is that good anyway. XD). Just a suggestion: Would you like to have me as beta for your story? I might also be able to give you a few ideas, if that's okay with you.

Ganbatte~ _

*~Crystal~*

remember me? Well i just wanted to add that if you dont like that i control time you could change the power i dont care much i just want to make sure i'm a half demon and hav a power and am an ally to the inu .

Awesome story! Love how things are turning out and that you left people wondering what's gonna happen next after the 34th chapter! I was wondering,is there a chance I can be a character in this story too! The way you put people in is so cool! (If possible, can I be named Rina, with black hair and green eyes? You can make it however you want. Demon, human etc.) Thanks and update soon! :D

i love the how you inserted you and all those others(who's names i dont recall) into the story. I love the personality you throw into the story. I wish i could be as great an authour as you.(Did i spell that right? Idont thinks so.)On with the story. And I would like to have a character of my own. I would be called Lislain and would have brown curly hair, hazel eyes and my power is to control time. You may use this character as you like i wont have any input on what i want the character to do. ya.

THANK YOU SO MUCH! KOUGA IS FINALLY MINE! (yes, this is Kougaismine4eva89, i decided to change my penname) yay! victory is ours! loved this chapter! it was full of humor, drama and my personal favorite...romance!

i can't wait to find out what will happen next. hmm, InuYasha and Miroku could try to use rabid purple squirrels to bite through the net...i am VERY hyper right now. i hope i can help out more in the future!

ttyl!