oh heck that was beautiful i love how you potray sakura bcs I've been fuming since kishimoto took away her character development at the end (from a naive fangirl to a mature young woman then unfortunately to a naive fangirl again) to justify making sasusaku (very toxic) canon even though shippuden sakura was pretty much over sasuke in the romantic sense and just wanted to get her friend back ugh i wish this was canon instead haha good read!

Great fic! I love Sakura but not a fan of the Ino/Sakura pairing. Bleh. You did very well convening Sakura and wanting to be with Sasuke but wanting to be loved in return.

That was... breathtakingly amazing! No words. Everyone was in character. Naruto, always trying to hide his hurt, Sasuke, indifferent yet vulnerable, Sakura, full of love but also compassionate. I usually don't like sakura, but in this, I felt that she deserves more. So yes, this was an amazing piece of fiction! Keep writing!

Love It.

nice.

HELL YEAH YOU PULLED IT OFF! Oh, and is that InoSaku in there?! I love that pairing as much as I love narusasu! very well written! I've never seen a fic like this before, very original plot - you know your facts! Ja ne!

This one is seriously well done, everyone stay completely in character and the story is soo real that I can actually imagine it happen! I can seriously imagine Sakura looking beautiful and happy but knows something is wrong (becouse that how she is!) Sasuke looking stiff and powerful and handsome (but still looking sad and lost!) and Naruto, dear sweet Naruto who try so hard to look like he was happy (but was crying from the inside)...My god, this story is like the perfect ending for the canon Naruto series! This is perfect! absolutely perfect! I love it!

This is, like, super awesome. I like how Sakura realizes how much Sasuke and Naruto in fact like each other and she's willing to give up her happiness (marrying Sasuke) for theirs. This is really well executed. I mean, I know I probably can't write as well as you do.

that was amazing for the first time I accepted sakura

Interesting and quite captivating read. (:

/Dragonwolf

wow that was really emotional and brilliant.

i have to admit at first i would have never guessed it's that good

i even like that you wrote it in Sakura's POV ( i don't particuallary like her xp)

really good D

I loved this story! The ending was quite an unexpected twist!

Lemme start by saying that I'm a Sasusaku fan, even though i know it'll never happen (a girl can dream can't she?)

Lemme finish by saying that this is probably something like how the manga's gonna go (maybe) I think that it's gonna b Narusasu...

With that said, good luck 2 u and your future fics :D this was brilliant, and i loved the ending.

This was brilliant.

Lovely story! I really liked all the symbolism and how Sasuke is portrayed. :)