This is a very nice story. I love it! Don't worry you definitely won't get kicked out! I've seen worse lol. Keep up the work!

Lol, the ending. "I'm going to enjoy fucking you, Sasuke" :D

continue please

LOL oh, Orochi, you pedobear. I'd love to read the actual banging X33

Please continue!

omg this is amazing! I've read it through like a hundred times now and I still can't get enough..please pleaseplease continue3?

wow, that was a good chapter, another would be vary good.

WOW! luv your story! PLZ CONTINUE IT! you got like 25 revews with mine for one chapter! AN' ANY OF THEN NEGATIVE! really, there should be more of this kind of stories out there!

PS: dont worry they wont kick you out of for writing this, you only have to put the rating!

If you think writing a sex yaoi story is going to get you kicked off,*laughs* then you haven't read many of them on here. I like your writing sytle, a second chapter would be great.

Plz continue :)

Chika-kun wants more. That was so fxcking sxc, foo'.

please continue. there aren't nearly as many OroSasu as there should be.

plz. ;}

beautiful! you really should continue it, and include graphic lemons of the actual rape... you won't get booted off fanfiction, as long as you have the proper rating and warnings. anyway, excellent fic! orosasu is the best, yet totally under-rated. there just isn't enough of it out there... please keep writing! you are really good.

(laughs) dude omigod i luv this soo much! lol dude i luv this haha

Um wow...that was in a way...interesting. i think you shouold continue, you capture orochimaru so perfectly lol