I loved this. It felt so personal; like an actual diary entry from a confused teen. Excellent job.

don't blame anything, it's a good fiction!

Hm ...

She THINKS she understands what people mean when they say they are making love.

But you have to know what love IS, first. She doesn't. Not if this is the comic book incarnation of Terra, as it seems to be. Of course (in the comic) Deathstroke actually did come to have feelings for her, and mourned her when she died. I mean, as much as he could have feelings for anyone. His performance as a father left an awful lot to be desired, and he cared more for his kids than he did for anything else.

Interesting take on Terra's POV. There are a few typos here and there, though not enough to seriously detract from the overall story.

Nice work.

I don't blame you I know exactly what it's like.

I LOVE you, and I love the new version of this fic. :) I think that it's because I can really relate to it, since you've phrased everything so well and described all of the sensations properly, as well as Terra's first...eh..."Big O" for lack of a better term. Keep up the good work! I saw that you had added another chapter, but you took it down? Are you going to put it back up? Because I'll totally review that one too. I like Slerra, in case you can't tell.

This is simply excellent writing, but I'd bump up the rating to "M". Just a suggestion.

wow, that was intense. lol, but i still liked it (:

Hey, I liked it. :) But then again I'm a little Slade obsessed. I used to think that way too. That's why the first line caught my attention like it did. You're a brilliant writer. It's nice to see your fics on here because they stand out. Keep it up!

This was pretty good. It's rare to see a story where Slade is the gentle one; usually she is so innocent in these stories. Very nice.

I liked it. I never thought of Terra as that cynical. I always pictured her naive and innocent, but you show and interesting side of her. When you say that she couldn't wake up and see him do you mean she still hasnt' seen his face some how or he'd be gone?

yeah, good job.