You Rock! Great story :-D

loved it! cool and in character acting and I could see the scenes before my eyes. The characterizations were really good and I especially loved the fith story the most. how everyone slowly started liking Tony and vetoed for him. How Abby first had an vendetta against him because he should replace her last favorite. Fornells coment. How each chapter was like a continuing of the last if Gibbs wasn't there... brilliant!
Thank you for your work,
sincerely Sona

A good selection

Another nice short story. Good dialog between Tony and Gibbs. A note...you used footpath in a couple of chapters, which suggests you are Engliash. I'm guessing you mean sidewalk. Otherwise I wouldn't have known.

Excellent! Tonys speech is a bit sloppy here, but that could be due his youth. Love Gibbs' line about being worried about the drool on his car. :)

these were great; funny, odd, genius insane (or is it insane genius?)... the style, flow, senarios all personify and parallel Tony's character. Brilliant insight as a writer with being able to make a writing style match a character and wonderful job!

Hey! I was checking out your A-Team/NCIS crossover story "Why you don't always catch your man" & it led me to this one! Great story! You should write NCIS stories more often, you really have a understanding and way with the characters. Anyways, just wanted to say I really enjoyed this, I could see everything playing out in my head as I read it. Please keep writing! :-)

DiNozzo would have totally given Gibbs a ticket

I loved it! You should make a sequel for this last chapter. I loved how Tony started recognizing his stares and looks.

:) yea this one was my favorite by far but great job with all these. Kinda wanna see the five (or however many) people that have broken into Tony's apartment lol...those looked interesting.

"On it, Boss." It's ridiculous how much meaning is in those words. Putting them there as the ending line was a nice finishing touch to a fantastic story. Definitely favorited.

Amazing story.

This last one was my favorite. Poor Tony didn't know what he was getting into.

This is awesome! I can't actually decide which one is my favourite (although, possibly chapter 5, because we see Tony interact with the whole gang). So very in character and you have no idea how much most the fics I've been reading up to now have NOT been. *loves*

Hey! I really enjoyed reading this story! Fun, entertaining, and original. The kind of story you want to read all over again when you just finished it! ;)