...That's a bit of a chapter bloater right there.

You really didn't need to put the entire damn poem in. It's a hair over 900 words of pure bloating. But whatever, if you want to fluff your count up with poems, that's cool, I didn't realize this was a crack-fic, so oh well.

Hope the rest of the story is good though, because I'm off!

lol wtf was the name spazz in this chapter

Oh it's plenty funny! Enjoying it so far :)

I'm not gonna lie, that was legitimately funny

Does he ever make it back to his dimension? Kind of interested to see what happens.

Oh god he is to stupid to read

Update or remake

Please continue

Nothing is funny. Neither was it fun. So what's the point?

Update!

some suggestions for future universes he could go to:

Dragonball
Campione
Highschool DxD
Borderlands
Konosuba
The Current version of My Little Pony
Percy Jackson
Pop Team Epic
Gender-bend Narutoverse (Naruto's dimension, except literally everyone is the opposite gender. He can then finally answer the questionif you have sex with yourself, is it incest or masturbation?")
Fairy Tail
To Aru Majutsu no Index
Attack on Titan
Fate/stay Night (and/or Fate/Grand Order)
Kore wa Zombie Desu Ka
Puella Magi Madoka Magika
Power Puff Girls
Samurai Jack
Hellsing
Yu-Gi-Oh
Magic the Gathering

Any one of those is can see turning out hilarious or awesome.

... I just realized, didn't Naruto take the form of an 11-year-old and is in first year? I can't imagine Hermione being so okay with sleeping with him if he's in that form all the time...

did he just invent Fairy Tail's Requip?

Naruto is spreading his bloodline... the Uzumaki will be one more!

yes its haunted... hahahaahahahah... its 1am and I am laughing like a maniac. my roommate is staring at me like I grew a second head... soo worth it