Reviews for I Will Dance With Cinderella
The God Squad chapter 1 . 2/6/2009
Sweet story and one that is so befitting to BJ, he is a fine outstanding father. He is meant to be with his family, was never meant to be in that mash unti. Keep writing.
EagleFeather66 chapter 1 . 7/21/2008
There is so much to be said about this sentimental fiction, but mere words are not enough to convey the emotions going through BJ while his daughter grows up. At first when she is small, she helps him relax, enjoy the finer things in life, he is soothed by her childish innocence. As she grows into a fine teenager, he feels the raw emotion of having to deal with the eventuality of losing her. And, finally at her wedding, she must make the ultimate break from the only man she's loved in her life, her precious father. Children are a gift from God, may we treasure them always. Fathers, love your children as one day they shall depart.
Meatball Surgeons chapter 1 . 6/1/2008
Aww'w'w'w'w'w'w'w'w'w'w'w'w'w, I know it's too late to stick in more to the disclaimer, but this story should be considered a loving tribute to the memory of Steven Curtis Chapman's five-year-old daughter, Maria Sue Chapman, who tragically died in the driveway of her own home when her teenage brother was unable to see her and accidentally ran over her with his vehicle. God be with this family! :'(
Atarah Derekh chapter 1 . 5/22/2008
OK, you can just get out of my brain now! Another beautiful song fic featuring two characters that I, too, imagine dancing to that song. Nice touch making Henry's son(?) the groom.

For your next MASH song fic, might I suggest "This is Home" by Switchfoot, as featured on the "Prince Caspian" soundtrack? Or perhaps the final scene of "Goodbye, Farewell, Amen" to the song "Brothers Under the Sun" by Bryan Adams? I'd do the latter myself, but I already have a song fic by that title about David and Jonathan.
AttheSwamp chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
That was absolutely wonderful - I have tears in my eyes now. At first I thought it was going to based on the dream that BJ had where he was dancing with Peg. That would ahve been nice - but this was even better.

Beautifully written and a story that will stay with me for a very long time.
Midnightdesire chapter 1 . 3/16/2008
BEAUTIFUL! I TOO CRIED A TEAR OR TWO and still spilling them as I write this.
queenofthebrokenhearts chapter 1 . 3/15/2008
that's the first fanfic thats made me cry! i love it!
Outsidersluver1992 chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
wow! very good, i can just see the feelings BJ is having.
KGKB radio chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
Hello. Very touching, a delightful tribute to father and daughter relashionships. Also, it was a wonderful change to have BJ at the center of a story, keep writing.
dixon-arrows chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
That was beautiful! *tear*