I love this soooo much! I know ypu probably dont even write fanfics anymore, you probably wont even see this but if you do, there are a ton of people who are waiting for a sequel!

Oh no... I'll be sad if deidara hurts him later on in the story... but on a good note... NARUTO KISSED SASUKE!

This is really interesting! I can't wait to read the rest of it!

Beautiful! I think you captured the characters and situation well! While most authors rush and their writing is ' all over the place' you took it slow and haf the characters develop a deep and meaningful relationship. Overall I give this a 10/10! Hope to see more soon!

This published? Not good enough. It's not the worst, but it's hardly the best I've read on this site (honestly, I cannot even call it decent). It took you 4 years to complete this, you should have rewritten it at some point. For the most story it was your everyday average fiction, but the parts involving Itachi in the last chapters were bad. His reasoning is seriously messed up. And the most interesting - he doesn't seem to notice he doesn't make any sense (no one really does, for that matter). Those decisions were already irrational at the time he was making them, his own arguments proove that. That part, where he tries to convince us, all bad he's done was to protect Sasuke was BULLSHIT. Even if we assume that the ends justify the means. And that was long before Naruto started to matter. He sent Sasuke away to be with people, who wouldn't fuck him up? That's why he drove him away exactly by fucking him up himself? If that was only about being gay and trying to spare him heartache, then maybe that explanation would make some sense. But what in God's name was Itachi trying to achieve by degrading and humiliating his little brother? By telling him Sasuke's a fuck up, a disgrace and doesn't deserve to be Uchiha? How would that help in anything? That will remain a mystery for me.

I have ambivalent feelings towards Tsunade. She's usually very positive character in most fics, but here I cannot feel disappointed with her taking bribe from Itachi. If she did that solely for money, then I cannot respect her. But you didn't give her a chance to explain herself. You even make her look quite innocent. Or at least she only sees herself as "messenger", when she's as guilty of getting rid of Naruto from school as Itachi was. Sasuke and Naruto should feel bitter towards her too for that.

How on earth could a minor not have a legal guardian? That bit escapes my comprehension. He didn't get lost in a system, Naruto's attending school, he must be paying bills, had to get his driving licence somehow. He couldn't have possibly done all this things, if he's not emancipated. So the way Tsunade and that other principal only threw up their hands, because he allegedly doesn't have a guardian is ridiculous. That's not the point here!

Another (really minor, considering) thing, I can understand where Deidara comes from in some matters. I get his bitterness about Itachi hiding in the closet, but he was kind of selfish too by choosing that faraway school, without considering another options. Maybe he didn't love Itachi enough to stay with him too? To use his own twisted logic... Especially since it wasn't only Itachi he would be forcing to leave, but also Sasuke. There's a problem of Uchiha company as well. I can't believe Deidara actually suggested selling it so easily, when Itachi has a minor to support. And btw, if Itachi had sold it, who would hire Dei later? He's lucky Ita gave him a job.

I'm surprised there was no lemon. Not that it's something bad IMO, but I think you could have rated it T at most.

Corny... But oh so satisfying. Too bad there weren't any lemons or limes. It was sweet though!

Your overuse of the term "God" turned me off of reading this story. There are plenty of names you could have used but for whatever reason you chose the most offensive term.

The song A Thousand Years perfectly describes how I feel about this story! :)

Wow! So fluffy! Romantic and drama all the times. I totally love ItaDei relationship and how cute when they're together. But one thing that unlike SasuNaru is that they call each other names, like love, baby, hunny, sunshine and all, but rarely call each other idiot and bastard (teme and dobe) which became their trademark name calling. And I think the ending of this fanfic is very good. I love twilight and Percy Jackson as well, hehe. I love to read the books. I think if you hate ending it, why don't you make a sequel? And if you did, don't forget to inform me! I'd love to read the continuation. Keep writing and Ganbatte! :)

Of all the great books you could have chosen, you chose shitty ass Twilight? #badchoice -_-

Thank you for this story. It took me two days to read it. But I laughed . I cried. I got angry. I sighed. It was fun.
Thank you.

hello..
i really enjoying reading your story...it is slightly diffrerent from any others sasunaru fanfic
sasuke seem more open about his feelings and didn't feel akward to say it is really a nice changing...but to tell the truth..i prefer a more listening sasuke,and a lesser talking sasuke..because i personally think a silent Uchiha always convey more emotions than the chatter Uchiha...maybe it is because a silent Uchiha show love by actions...
anyway,,congratulations on your story...it a nice catch to read something beyond stereotype sasuke and naruto.i ship this pairing s much...i hope there will be more sasunaru from you LUCK!

I compleatly loovveeedd it!

It is not right for Itachi to get a happy ending after he was so terrible to Sas & Naru for so long. He was so terrible Sas tried to kill him. He was so terrible Sas almost got hit by a car trying to get away from him. I don't care about what kind of long, poor-me explanations he gives about being bitter after Dei left. Maybe that excuses him not wanting Sas to be gay (it doesn't, actually), but does it excuse him being cold hearted to Sas for years? Telling Sas he was worthless and a terrible Uchiha? Constantly treating Sas like he was worthless and a terrible Uchiha when he wasn't telling him it? Working all the time so Sas was always alone? Was it Sas's fault he was a shit boyfriend to Dei and got left behind? He didn't have to take out his pity party on Sas. He wrecked Sasuke's childhood and made him feel like he was unloved. I can never forgive that.

Where would Sas be right now if Naru hadn't come along? Try and imagine this fic without Naru in it and you can especially see why I don't think Ita should have gotten a thing at the end of this fic.

Maybe I would respect Ita if he'd realized on his own that he'd been a terrible person. But no, it was only after he got his stupid boytoy back that found the balls to come apologize and start treating Sasuke decently again. (Guess Sasuke was no longer useful for taking out his frustrations on.) Naruto is the only character I can respect because he's the only one who knows Ita doesn't deserve forgiveness. Dei is an idiot for going back to him after what a terrible boyfriend he was (and after he saw the proof of how miserable Ita had been making Sas that night in the car...that will eventually be you, Dei...) Sas, I just feel sorry for him, going back to the guy who emotionally neglected him. :(

Damn. This fic has possibility, but you're hitting us over the head with a hammer here. Every emotion in the fic is so far over the top it's unreal. Haven't you ever heard of subtlety?

What do I mean by over the top? Well, for example:

1.) Naruto and Sasuke aren't just attractive boys, they're "gods." (Insert eyeroll here. How many gods do you know of with the complexion and awkwardness of a teenage boy? I rest my case.)

2.) With *just one glance* Naruto and Sasuke are now both "in love" with each other. Naruto is in fact "the first person [Sasuke] had ever thought he might love." (No, for god's sake no. That is not love. That is LUST. They may be teenagers who have never been in love, but they are certainly smart enough to know what they are currently feeling is certainly not it.)

3.) Sasuke is an asshole to Naruto for no other reason than to be an asshole. (Come on now, really? Sasuke wants to be left alone, not to be in the center of drama. There's no way he'd be starting shit right now. He has to live with Naruto for the rest of the year, doesn't he? His behavior around Naruto was the complete opposite of his intentions. Sasuke could have easily have been blunt, but not rude, to Naruto about not wanting any friends. It would have been Naruto's job to agree to his demands - what else could he do? - and then try and change his mind later.)

4.) Naruto starting to cry over Sasuke being an asshole. (What is he, five years old? Sasuke told him he doesn't like anyone, doesn't get along with anyone, and doesn't want friends, period. Those should have been big clues not to take his behavior personally. Children cry when other kids reject their friendship. Teenagers are mature enough to know an asshole when they see one.)

5.) Kiba's extreme overreaction to the incident with Sasuke. (God, could he have been treating Naruto any more like a girl? Naruto can fight his own battles, thanks.)

6.) Naruto sobbing Sasuke's name as he slept. (I can't. I just can't...)

7.) After all the melodrama of the previous day, the tears, the threats from Kiba, and even more tears, Naruto and Sasuke are right back to lusting after each other in the morning. (What the hell...can't Sasuke have a little consistency in his personality? Before he thought Naruto was annoying, now he *loves* the fact that they are so different from one another and Naruto is so bubbly?! He's also decided to get over his no-friends or anyone else policy pretty quickly hasn't he? And since when is Naruto his and by what leap in logic makes Sasuke think it's OK for him to be possessive of Naruto and jealous of him hanging out with Kiba? You know Kiba, Naruto's friend? The guy who came over to tell Sasuke he was being an asshole to Naruto, the guy Sasuke has suddenly decided to want...)

And that's just all the WTF-ness of this chapter alone. I see that there are another 20 or so more chapters than this. Your writing style may very well have improved and the later chapters be a lot better than the first two have been. Unfortunately, I do not have the willpower to find out. Good luck with your future writing project. This one, unfortunately, was not for me.