Honestly the main reason I started this was coz I love the attitude of the writer, confidence is best! But as I’m reading I really like the story too it’s so intriguing but I was a bit confused on how she could still fly after witnessing her family’s death I mean one heck of a happy thought am I right ️

this is soooooo sad!( well not entirely sad i just don't like it when i see movies with peter grows up because that means that he will eventually...)

Nice Peter is so funny and cute I think Jane likes him do u think that :))) I do :)

Peter should ask Jane be his girlfriend at the end but it so cute :)))))))

Cool have more romantic comedy in it like Peter Pan talk to Jane / or if he ask her out :)

I love it / is Peter ask Jane be his girlfriend:)))

This is beautifulllll~

BEST STORY EVER OF JANE X PETER PAN

You made me cry
I loved that film
Thanks

That was beautiful i almost cried...
I loved it!

Cute so far. I always did prefer Jane a heck of a lot more than Wendy. Also preferred the 2nd movie by far.

Poor Jane :(
At least she's now in Neverland with Peter. And nice to see Hook so livley as usual. Lol. Must be kinda nice for them not to grow up too. I mean, minus the whole Peter always stopping them thing. Lol.

So sad that her family died, but this was exactly the type of fix I was looking for! Good start!

Haha! BRILLIANT! Hook's gonna piss his pants!

I haven't actually read the chapter yet, but I read the authors note at the beginning and just had to comment. It was fucking AWESOME! Not to mention, hilarious! So yeah, now I have high hopes that this story will be great. With such a cool authors note, it's got to be.