Why dja hafta end it so sad :(

Aw! Poor Shiro! :( I wanna give him a hug!

I like the part where Shirosaki changed himself to be Ichigo's mirror!

I like all of it!

I can picture Shiro tearing the letter at the end.

Thanks for making this!

Hey, hey. Stop making me crying XD *joking*

Why don't you try to write a sequel?

Err, I don't know... no, forget it xD

i'm a pessimist

and you won't be changing that

anytime soon,

milord.

not anytime soon.

i just learned not to let go

when it got too much

so i'm still here,

now aren't i?

Hi!Wuo I love it!Really like it!I like the tone you put in the fic, when i finished to read it, i was really sad for Shiro, and i can sense tension in it!*-* You did it very well!And the last sentence is like broke with all!I like a lot how you have written this fic!It's so good!This is one of your fics that i love more. Continue writing!

This was good, especially with Shiro saying that he's trying so hard to become the person Ichigo would want and stay with. Turning himself into Ichigo's mirror wasn't a bad idea either, you took a lot of things from the anime/manga and twisted them to fit this fan-fic. The ending was kinda depressing for me though, after all that writing...he tears it up and let's it go to the wind, letting his written words be unread.

What would've sucked much more would be if he turned around and saw Ichigo standing there. Yes...that would've sucked.

Love this little story, so sweet and full of angst. Could almost feel the pressure of writting a letter to the person you're in love with...it's the most difficult thing to do compared to just, straight-out, telling them.

Aw . ;

Poor Shiro. I want to hug him. Then bitchslap Ichi for making him all angsty. Even if it's bittersweet angst.. w

(Twitches) Must. Resist. Urge. To. Hug. Hichi!

So sad!

Aw, I love how he said he made himself to look like Ichi.

And how he always contradicts himself. So cute!

I can COMPLETELY picture Shiro ripping the letter up in the end, after all that work. _

Good job!

That was really sweet..

I love how hollow Ichigo admired his king so much that he actually changed his appearance to become Ichigo's inverted mirror.