I don't like it. I Love it!

Just a tad confused in the next two chapters, were they at R and R’s new apartment or at a bar?

This story is so perfect I can't stop smiling ugh great job

Me encanto tu historia fue tan graciosa y hermosa como complementaste a este par y me alegra que el destino los juntara como algo mas que sospechoso y detective gracias

Oh my holy goodness, this was awesome. :D
The plot was good, the characters were in character, and it was REALLY funny. Needless to say...this is now one of my favorite Death Note fanfics. I mean, how could it not be with L's chibi look of doom, Matsuda's pervert mouth, and I'm sure you know what else? Thanks for posting this, like, seriously.

Nope. I'm done. What the Hell L. Nope. Fuck this shit. It's 2:41 am and I have to get up at 5:25 am for school and I'm fucking done. You are way too good of a writer and pleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease do not give up on the hard work. I absolutely love it and don't stop writing till you drop dead or become Kira

at chapter 2

Trully amazing C: You've made me laugh all the way through it, I do love your sence of humour!) Thumbs up!

Oh hun, I've seen a video of a man sucking himself off. Plenty in that matter.

...I'm not into L!seme to Raito (or anyone) ...but THIS was ADORABLE! I mean-! Jdjjdj! THEIR TALKS AFTER THE SEX XD SOOOOOO CUUUTTEE XD CAN'T wait for sequel!

Awwnhhhh! Happy ending! XD,..,but..what's the last sentence mean?! He's gonna let L be seme when they finally do it?!

NOOOOO! I'M FUCKIN CRYING! DAMN IT! NO! WHYYY?! THIS SHOULDNT HAVE HAPPENED! SCREW...FUCKIN NAMIKAWAY! THAT FUCKIN SHIT

Kyaaahhhh! Raito being affectionate and spoiling his babyyyy! SOOOOOO cuuute!...Nmikawa though! -pout- Cockblocker (I love saying that XD)

Kyaaahhh! I can't BELIEVE Ryuzaki finally agreed to be uke for Raito! That was SOOOOOO sweet and adorable of hiiimmm! CAN'T wait for that smut

...ok...I feel bad for Mikami..Damn iiittt! Mikami is better off with Matsuda! Byubu! ANYWAY! THE song! Unnnfff! Ryuzaki's amazing! And I like Mello for listening to him...BUT DAMN IT WTF WAS ASSHOLE RAITO THINKING, ASKING HIM TO SLEEP WITH THEM?! UGH! ...