COOKIES! I love it is really cute. Thanks so much~

KAT

This really was quite good to read. I like the idea and have always wondered about how James and Lily got over the whole 'we hate each other' thing and became a couple. This works well to solve that snag, is well punctuated, has good grammar, has good structure and it is a great idea.

Keep writing always,

Leon

wow! i cant believe it! this is such a awesome story! you should totally continue it!

aw they are so cute together! It's a really fantastical story (yeah, I know, not a real word but it seemed apropriate.)

Yay, cookies! :) That was really nice - very well written, and a very cute story :) x