Oh, how I love this story! This is I believe my third time reading through this fic, and I still adore it so much! You have such a wonderful creativity in making so many characters with such unique and intriguing point of views. This fic has been a joy to read over and over, I guess my only complaint is that it was never finished. Though, I do understand life gets in the way. So I will continue to reread these sets of drabbles and love the details and (sometimes) vagueness that’s keeps a person on the edge of their seat! Thank you for writing and posting what you have all ready, I greatly appreciate it!

This was fantastic to read. I love your PC's and I hugely enjoyed reading how they viewe our beloved four. Thank you so much for sharing this!

Love, love, LOVE this story! Amazing writing and I really like the different POV's! I don't know if your finished or not with this story but I would love if it continued! Amazing work!

Its a pity you haven't updated this story! Its so sweet and - how do i say this.. while reading you don't notice that the time is flowing out the window i love that you describe situations out of different views and give every single character your love! :) the best thing is that you connect every story to a thriller(?) Thats so exciting! :D
I hope you do post another chapter!
Greetings frim Munich~

love pevensie bonding- cant wait to read

Really great story! I like that each chapter has a different point of view from different creatures. Hope you'll keep updating this story.

I know this was forever and a half ago, but this is such an amazing idea. I love it, and I would adore you forever if you got another chapter up. If you don't, it would be amazing if I could get permission to continue this storyline... The four of them through other people's lives. Thank you so much!

I've gone back and re-read all 22 chapters. Loved them all as usual and the new ones I've missed as well. I'm glad you are continuing so we are not cheated of some good story telling.

Rolletti

Kind of fun to see them acting like kids, squirming in their seats. They may be rulers, but they're still children (at least, I assume they are...) and have too much energy to sit still that long. I like Susan's victory. The looks I imagined on their faces...

JSYK, naiad and dryad are not spelled the same way.

Well. I'm caught between "poor Adan" and "stupid Adan." Running off into what was pretty clearly a fight when he had no combat experience was not one of his brighter ideas. Then again, the first few paragraphs seem to imply that he has a lot of bone-headed ideas.

I'm rather fond of your little faun. Fun chapter. I'd still like to know what all this animosity is about... looking forward to the chapters to come. :)

Oh, poor, stupid Adan. Still though, it did demonstrate just how much the Four care about those in their kingdom, so you definitely did well capturing that.
All in all, very good.
-Dryad

I liked seeing Nysha again- she was one of my favorites among your earlier characters :) (Also, does Toman have a bit of a crush on her? I got that impression from the detail about how he kept thinking about her smile.)

I like that Edmund basically just said "Screw it!" and got the cordial. Honestly Peter, I think you're in 'dire circumstances'.

Very nicely done!
-Dryad

I love Edmund and Peter being brothers. Overruling Peter's stupid no-cordial decision just seems like something he would do. As always, love having things shown from other peoples' point of view. It's fun and gives you practice working with a variety of characters :)

One thing: when you're talking about Nysha's dish full of blood, you say "the blood instead" when I think you meant inside.