It's really good.

.AWESOME!

Awwwwww that's so sweet! I really liked it great job! The end made me a little sad that he becomes kira again, BUT IDFC RIGHT NOW! this was great!

It was superb and excellently expressed

lovely story

OMG That was hot and adorable XD

Dude, at first I was all like, 'Aww, this is sweet'. Then I was like 0.o Damn that's hot... Then I was like, 'It's back to being sweet, cute!'at the end.

I loved your fanfic! It was interesting and captivating from start to finish!

I'm especially impressed with how you really captured the personality of Light and of L, even more so since this is your first Death Note fanfic. (:

And are you serious about this being your first lemon? You writing was so...experienced (definitely in a good way)! XD

Keep up the good work!

The beginning was funny. And the end was cute. Oh, and the middle was yummy. Beginning, middle, end. That makes a whole story, right? So that mean you're WHOLE story was awesome! xD

this was your first lemon? wow, you're gonna be a success in that case maybe the sex it self started a bit sudden, but i'd say the writing makes up for that. seriously, this was my first good lemon in a long time, they're all so alike, and so unrealistic. i hope you write both more death note and more lemons :3

so kawaii!

u don't even understand how happy this story made me (:

Hot! xD But I like that you kept the characters' personalities intact. Very hard to do and you did well. :D

not bad at all, it makes me sile :) -dumb reply-

Yumm-o! I congradulate you on this story since it made me ite my thumb in an imitation of L. x3

Wow! For your first lemon, the was damned HAWT! Please continue writing more!

~Kurai-Shuwazi