awwwwww I love this one

Did you just make me like a sociopath?

I really like it. 1 or 2 more chapters would have been great

I almost cry dammit...
Anyway this story is very well-written! Amazingly done as well ,but the problem is this is one shot fanfic...

i like this naruto, the cynical one i wish there was a sequel

I like it.
It was sad how it ended with just that, because I wanted them to have happier endings like your other NaruTayu works.
I'm no masochist or anything, but I like how I teared up when Tayuya was thrown into a desperate situation - when she was left alone and was trying to ask for forgiveness desperately...and I like it, because the work made me feel her emotions if only a little bit.

you should continue this story or let someone else take it and write for it

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Aw, the story was sad, but heart warming too! I really enjoyed it. Can't wait to see more of your work!

It was good. A bit sad. I wish there was a sequel to this. A single chapter to put closure. That's what puts me off when reading most one shots; the lack of closure to the story.

Nice story. Shame it's only a one-shot though wanted to read more :)

One-shot sequel. Please.

That...reminded me of death note in some cases. Dang crafty my new friend. Cookies to you. Quite the tear jerker at the end. And when you had Naruto leave with Tayuya begging...I just stopped reading to say 'Damn...'

This story singlehandedly turned my into a NaruTayu fan, amazing job!

This was good! I want a sequel! lol