Reviews for Coup D'Etat
hnh058513 chapter 1 . 8/9
Funny misconception, as revealed by the secret reports, Joshua was intending to erase the Shibuya UG not the RG, while the erasure of the RG would destroy it's UG, the opposite would only negatively influence the RG
MiyreaZED chapter 1 . 9/7/2019
I refused to go to sleep after I read a chapter of this because I needed to read it all!

It was so good and had all the feels, and the story is spot on!
TheBlackSnorlax chapter 8 . 7/16/2017
Might have read through this fanfic about 4 times all the way from start to finish it's that good
Yukionna13 chapter 8 . 6/5/2016
This fic is really nice. Exactly the pretty much f****d up universe of TWEWY and everyone trying to get more powerful.

I loved the banter between Joshua and Neku. It was really amusing. Also the thing with Neku's dad. Wow would have known that his father was so... Unique.

Anyway, thanks for this wonderful story.
Liddell101 chapter 8 . 3/8/2016
YAY! super awesome story can't wait 4 the epilogue XD
Can-You-Guess chapter 8 . 5/21/2015
Wow, that was amazing! Congratulations on finishing this, and so happy on that Joshua and Neku got their happy-ending. :)

A truly amazing story.
xion chapter 8 . 4/30/2015
That was awesome!I loved it!
Anon-san chapter 8 . 4/14/2015
Oooohmygoshhhhhh
F for fabulous, this feels like a canon sequel tbh, it's canon as far as I'm concerned at this point
Everyone's so in character and even the romance was subtle in a good way
It's been six years but that epilogue where ; x ;

Hecka great ; u ;
matchynishi chapter 8 . 7/13/2013
Very cute fic.. enjoyed reading it.
Alyss Penedo chapter 8 . 3/31/2013
Romance aside, the plot in and of itself was really well done. A bit shaky in some parts, but engaging and interesting.

I believe there was some mention of an epilogue...?
Guest chapter 8 . 11/26/2012
I really enjoyed reading this. Hope you make more like this.
Inita chapter 8 . 10/1/2012
This was seriously an amazing fanfic; it was one where I could actually read through and not put down halfway or get bored - kept me going, that's for sure.

I love how you wrote out both Neku and Joshua as well as Mr. H and the Reapers. It seemed pretty in-character to me and even Beat, Shiki, and Rhyme though they only got a small part. There were a few things that perked my interest (particularly the relationship between Neku and his father). I at first thought said relationship was, at one point, abusive seeing how Neku didn't like talking about him, and how he practically went into a panic when Josh had admitted he spoke to Mr. Sakuraba. However, if there is something in author notes or another one of your fanfics that I missed, I will definitely look into it.

All in all, this was very nice. I could rant endlessly; your battle scenes were well played out and didn't seem like an RPG and trust me: That kinda BS is possible and easy to fall into with writing. Tough, yeah? But you keep everything simple and clean, balanced and what not. Even the dialogue (i.e: The last two chapters) fit in nicely. It wasn't forced or strained.

I have to admit, this made me see a better side to Joshua than before. Granted he /is/ my second favorite, but I'm always open to see what other readers will interpret about his past or just personality in general. Joshua is a mysterious character so it's nice to see separate opinions and readings.

Okay, I'm ranting now, so let me just end by saying this:

Great job, this was a /fantastic/ read, and it helped me a lot through a... "rough time", so to speak. And I would not worry about the epilogue, but it /is/ up to you so if you want to post it, be my guest. Either way, I'm sure I'll like it :)

Inita
Fai Gensou chapter 8 . 6/18/2012
well...at least you can leave school after middle school in japan. don't think neku would have the time
Shadow Storyteller chapter 8 . 3/22/2012
I love it.

Everyone was in character (an always blushing Neku wasn't present, thank god!), it was funny, and it was well-written. Sho coming in seemed a little out there since he wasn't really mentioned earlier, but everything else flowed smoothly. I liked Neku's dad, too.
SisterOfScarletDevil chapter 8 . 12/31/2011
Such an AMAZING story! One of the best I've read ever! . And the ending? IT'S ABOUT TIME NEKU! XD

So... about that epilogue... Hurry it up! XD Just kidding, but I do want to (hopefully) read it soon kay? ;)
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