This story was amazing! It was very well written and I enjoyed reading it/

So this is like your second lemon? THAT WAS GREAT! Well, great story!

this was really good! ;)

Oh dam. That was hot. lol

LOL. Bakura is really a naughty boy. Scratch that. A very sexy naughty boy. XD

Well, at least now Marik has learnt his lesson about how irresistible Bakura can be. Especially in his boredom time. lol

Nice fic, I like it.

Im Surprisd! Ur Frst Lemon! Pretty Damn Gd Job U Dd! And I Agree Completely-There Def Needs To Be More ThiefShipping! o Lolz And Yea, Isis Walking In On Them Wuld Be Funny Bt It Wuld Ruin The Incredibly Sexy Atmosphere So Im Glad Tht Wasnt Added XD

how cute?~

Really good fic! Best pairing ever, too.

"Marik really shouldn’t have told him to find a way to entertain himself. That was just asking for trouble." And I would be willing to wager quite a lot that aforementioned fact did not escape Marik. Little tease. ::big grin::

I think you did a wonderful job on this. Keep it up!

OMG! FREAKING AMAZING! This is awesome! ]

I shouldn't be reading this type of stuff but who cares when it's this good .

Well done on such a great fic and thank you for writing it D

I so love this story. Most fics always have Malik way too submissive or too uke like. *Glares evily at all fics that make Malik out as a pansy* I get very specific about how the characters act and I believe you did a really good job with them. I love Malik when he is pissy or when he is acting mischeveously.

~Lucia

I really liked this-u stayed in character fairly well and I loved that Marik, even though he was uke-he def wasn't submissive! Hope u write some more ! U should definitely put this on adult fanfiction ! And, having either Marik's sis or brother or maybe both walk in some time would be too funny! (Plot for a yummy, smex filled chapter 2!);)

I love this pairing, they are so hot together. For not having had much experience, you wrote the lemon really well. I loved it.

I loved it :)

i can beleive this was ur first attempt..it was amazing xD