Uhhh, waaaaaay to many abrupt changes...
Abruptly warm and caring Kyuubi. Eight year old Naruto taller than some adults overnight, no freak out from the ninja..
Plus time travel because of two seems a little, wasteful, and riggt after their deaths...

Magnificent story can’t wait for more please update soon

Are you still going to continue this story?.

Can't wait until you continue! Keep it up please.

Lol thats what my friend says to me she always be like “Alazy(my nickname) get your head out of your ass

I hope you'll update the story soon :'(

Ok, it's been way past June 25th. It is January 16th 2010 as of this review. What the heck is taking you so long? You had the making of a great story and you have apparently stopped writing it? What the heck? I mean, have you abandoned this story, or have you just not been able to write for various reasons? At least post and A/N chapter explaining why it's taking you so long to update. I don't mean to sound harsh, but you are going to end up annoying a lot of people, who like me, really like this story, but are annoyed that it's taking so long. Now if life has thrown you a few curveballs so to speak, then that's understandable that you would take this long, but please at least update with a chapter, explaining why you are taking so long. You have a good story, here, you seriously need to either, continue writing, it, put it on temporary Hiatus, or if you have completely and utterly lost any and all inspiration for this story, you need to put it up for adoption by another author. Thank you and have a nice day.

Ok, great job so far, but you do have a couple problems. First you are rushing way to much. You definitely need to slow down. Also since you have a good Kyuubi you need to be careful to avoid the pitfalls that all authors of Good Kyuubi fics have to be wary of falling into. Namely making Naruto too powerful too fast. While it's alright to have him be really powerful, you need to make sure that you don't make him really powerful in a really short amount of time. You are beginning to show signs of having a story that falls into this pitfall. Also you, in my honest, yet humble opinion made Sarutobi and Iruka, especially Iruka accept Kyuubi to fast. After all Kitsune were know in Japan as tricksters, so in their mind it would be quite possible that Kyuubi was putting on an act to manipulate them, and especially Naruto. But other then these problems mentioned you do have a the makings of a good story, one that I hope turns out to be a NaruFemHaku pairing as that is my favorite fanon pairing, seeing as Haku, unfortunately died in canon. Well anyway have a nice day.

uhh its way past june now lol

A great story with great promise. Obviously school comes first, but I hope you don't abandon this and I eagerly await the next chapter.

dont worry i wont quit on you

hey, how's the story coming? it's been almost a month. i really wish you'd hurry, i really can't wait for the next chapter. I have a question though, as far as relationships go, are you gonna have naruto with fem haku, fem kyu, or both? i see that there will probably be a relationship between kyu and naruto, and one with haku as well, but i wanted to know if it would be romantic, how it goes now leans towards the both, and that could work, but if it is both, use the clan resteration act, with naruto being minato's son, since the concil would definitly want the bloodline of the strongest nin revitalized. if i had to say anything about advice, i'd say have a chap or 2 completly devoted to sparring with sasuke and training with kyu (sorry for not using your name for her, but i read a lot of stories, since i want to right my own, ironicly like this one in some ways, but with naruto leaving the village after he fakes his and haku's death, they getting together, then forming a triangle with kyu when they figure out how to release the seal and give kyu partial freedom, and it) i also awanted to know if yuou had any advice to give , since i like your writing style, any help you could give to someone who is new to this would be appreciated. I hope that you post a new chap soon, and that you didn't abandon this story, it has great potential, and your writing seems to bring it out. hope my review wasn't too long,, can't wait to read the next story

A Well written story...I even like the possible friendly rivalry between Sasuke and Naruto (if that's what you are going for)

I really like this fic, and it gave me an idea for a kyuubi/naruto romance fic, if you don't mind. I really like it so far, and can't wait to see what happens next!

“No I didn’t eat your penguin!”

I have no comment for that. You know it took me ten minutes to actually read past that line, because I stopped to laugh each time I tried.