oh god I love your stories and so want to see more

Really good story. Could use a bit of work on paragraphing and the likes but apart from that such a great and interesting peice of work. :)

Alright, this story was awesome. There were so many comedic moments in this story it's really hard to pick that one favorite moment. I think you missed an opportunity to write how Kim and Shego finally got to that point of romantic companionship because that scene in the gym then the scene of Shego(Kim's mind) exiting Kim's (Shego's mind) room was too jumpy. You could have included that missing scene of them deciding to pursue a romantic relationship somewhere in between or earlier in the story.

Overall, it was still awesome.

Con, a major gap in story how the love queen got hitched, besides that little peck in the girl's locker room. Surely wasn't enough to start a whole relationship.

Pro, your story layout was spot on. OOC roles, but spot on for how you portrayed them. Excellent Job. I'd like to see more, but similar stories in the future. Keep up the good work

poor Ron and his confus-ed-ness lol

lol
awesome story i enjoyed very much
hope to see more like this

I sort of forgot Ron existed until the end.

God! 80% of the things your characters did were really out of character. But damn it was so nice to see a Kigo fic without all those damn reservations and Kim being a silly goody-goody. So many lesbians... Why can't everyone I meet turn out to be a lesbian?

Woo! Go Ron-man!

This story was awesome, just thought you should know.

ZIrvs

Ummm...holy crap.
I'm gonna ignore the weirdness of a high school being *that* thoroughly city-fied, and just say how strange it is that a guidance councilor has a *SECRET ROOM* in his office, and also wasn't shocked speechless by the body-switching.

XD I can't believe I was actually skeptical of this story at first but after reading the first chapter I was hooked! Man that was a good laugh and the only thing I disliked about any if that was the format the words were stuck in.

You wrote a really great story!

But there are some mistakes in your french sentences, if you need any help to correct them tell me. I'll be glad to help even in a other fics.

Anyway, I will definitly read more of your work :)

Oh my I loved this story. There are a couple of rough bits but over all it's great and the idea is brilliant. Thank you for writing such an enjoyable story.

Really good piece of art!

Tho, got to agree with EagleRay, it would have been nice to have the gap between Ch 5 and 6 filled, I was wondering about the sudden involvement as well. Perhaps in another short story? Just to fill in the jucie details :)

Oh, and nice work on the -uhm- german history references. I was very amused.

my god that one was truly amazing i'm starting to thing you are a writing godlol.