Reviews for Double Trouble
YokaiAngel chapter 6 . 6/5/2016
Awesome!~~~
Idkwhattoname chapter 6 . 1/21/2014
R u going to finish? Please do! It's an amazing story!
Panda Master X chapter 6 . 8/2/2013
Please update this soon! I really really really want to read the next chappie for this story! Please update!
curfewrebel chapter 1 . 7/16/2013
LOL I'm gonna flippin' die! Ahahahahahahaha!

* dies
Darkis Shadow chapter 6 . 1/1/2013
Abel you bad bad little crusnik! You deserved that dunking and you know it! Leon you poor baby, I hurt for you
raven knight01 chapter 6 . 10/7/2012
This story is both cute and funny. I love the fact that the twins personality is switched and I found Abel comments during the dunking so funny. There's too many things to say that I liked, so let's me just say that I love your story and that I hope that you update eventually.
Gravity's Child chapter 6 . 12/30/2011
Ouch. That really must have hurt. So tell me, are you going to be putting any of the other days of the Devil into this story? Oh; I forgot, congratulations on cteating the most adorable version of Abel I have ever seen. Abel, $1000.000; A chbi Abel, $400,000,000,000,000; A swearing Chibi Abel, priceless. Keep up the wonderful work, okay?
wolfawaken chapter 5 . 1/7/2011
I know that it has been over a year since you had updated. So I am hoping for us new readers who just got hooked on Trinity Blood that you will update. This is too funny and well written to leave it standing like this. Please update as soon as you can because I know life goes on and this is trivial thing. Thanks a new fan.
alchemicmonkey chapter 5 . 2/3/2010
this is funny. i loved the amusement park bit, especially Leon on the Merry Go Round. i would kill to get that picture of him and the chibi crusniks.
Miru Sheimateru chapter 5 . 11/12/2009
AW! i cant wait untill the next chapter..please hurry an update...or the evil lamas shall hunt you down! MUHHAHAHAHA!

Love Miru.
Anne1313 chapter 5 . 10/29/2009
Awesome story

I cant wait for the next chapter

well done
indusina chapter 5 . 10/15/2009
Thank you for updating this, I really like it! Please keep on updating!

/Indusina
Seirei Nightlord05 chapter 5 . 10/13/2009
Hi...

Hey, took you quite some time to update...I'm starting to think that maybe you don't want to continue the story...

LOL...Now, this could mean trouble for the two Fathers, trying to deal with not one...not two but three Crusniks who happen to have similar thinking (at times)...

And how will the world (the Vatican and Orden especially) handle any tricks from the Dark Holy Combination of Crucniks' minds...?

Take care...Update soon...Bye2...
PineApple chapter 4 . 9/30/2009
Firstly I want so say... LOL. I can picture lil' Cain and Abel, they are so cute. And funny, it seems.

However, I feel that Abel is somewhat ooc. It has been stated that as a child, he somewhat hated humans, despising how weak and selfish they were. I'm not sure, if in this fanfiction they have turned into their younger versions, without memories of what has happened or if only their bodies have become chibis.

If they have transformed into children, I feel that Abel should act differently. He would HATE humans and feel that he himself is above them. I think Cain is less ooc, but he should speak more. I'm not sure if you are basing this on the books, anime or the manga, but in the flashback in the anime, Cain talks quite a bit, about future and such. Therefore I feel they would be a bit more mature.

I hope you won't feel insulted by this review. English isn't my best language and I feel that's why my reviews always seem.. more attacking? So, no, this isn't meant to be a flame to critizise and make you feel bad, and I'm sorry if it seems so.

PineApple out.
indusina chapter 4 . 8/5/2009
Yey! This is great!

/Indusina
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