This is just... amazing. No, I mean it. I actually laughed out loud while reading this. Keep up the good work!

*sigh* I've never played Fall Out, so I searched up a novelisation, and ... Liam Neeson? Is that a joke or is that genuinely in the game? I really do think it's a joke because the author seems to be trying to put 'Liam Neeson' into every line of the prologue. If it's meant to be a joke, I don't find it funny at all, I just find it bloody annoying and a block for my immersion.

I've ranted about this before, but I will only bring it up now. Nearly every Fan Fiction is lazy as hell with describing environments, the authors are really lazy with that sort of thing. 'Take out character introductions, what those boring things nobody reads?' This story so far suffers the lack of descriptive environments, but that's the clever part: it doesn't. There are a few scenarios where description is not required, a baby is being born, click, we have a mental image of a ward in a hospital where a woman is screaming and- you get the point.

I applaud this technique, whether it was done by accident I don't know, but I don't want to see this later, there are only a few scenes where this technique would work. But because of the lack of character thought and description, it opens up another problem, one fucking lined paragraphs. Damn it! Isn't that like one of the most basic rules? Pace your paragraphs, not too long, not too short. This suffers that latter, and is not welcome.

I hope I can be introduced to the Fall Out series positively, and not by a fan fiction which will put me off the entire series, no pressure Flo- waaaaait, is that your actual online name? Flopsie, it's pretty badass, love the originality.

Liam Neeson! Nooooo!

Great chapter loved how you did that stereo typical us army colnel joke.

Oh noes! What will we do without Liam Neeson's alluring Irish voice!? All is lost! D:

*Old radio show host voice*

In the next chapter of our hero's adventure, the feral ghouls engage in a deadly battle of tap dancing with the surviving scientists and Player Name! Can he beat back the hordes of scarily synchronised psychophants with his sweet styles!? Tune in next time, for...FALLOOOUUUT! THE NOVELISATIIIIOOOON!

*Cue cheery theme music and chorus, then, a commercial about genetically manufactured bread*

HAHA! The part of the nice Enclave troopers really cracked me up.

Awesome chapter great to see you updating again.

Player name, we are waiting for new chapter! please dont abandon this in the half, if youre still alive.

so many months without update.. ;(

This chapter is hilarious. You are brilliant!

Oh my lord. I was right. Each chapter is better than the last. Funnier, too.

Hilarious so far. I know that this is going to be a good read. XD

This story is great and hilarious so far! Can't wait for an update :D

Great chapter funny as hell can't wait for the next one.

great chapter i can't wait for the next update.

"Don't worry," said Liam Neeson, "that's where Player Name comes in."

"Huh?" said Player Name.

Best line ever! I'm so glad somebody finally pointed out the inconsistency of an overprotective daddy like James sending his only child to fight through a nest of supermutants all alone.