I hope I am not too late

do you still have this account

do you still remember where you were going with this

i hope so it was awesome

anyway i think you should do jaspers view of chapter 2

Amazing! However, its William Jennings Bryan not Bryant. And don't diss him...you never know who's related to him. Lol.

Strangely enough, I had an idea about the Volturi killing Alice... so it's interesting to read your take on what happens to Jasper afterward :)

Great minds think alike!

You can do better! xD What I think you should do is have the kid that was drawing in his sketchbook be all like, "Oh no! You ain't touchin Anna!" To Jasper. P Make him be a love interest. -sage nod-

Too lazy to log in and review.. xD It looks like it could go somewhere, and be rather interesting. Masquerade is still stuck in a 'meh, no reason for this' phase.. -le sigh-