Ouch. Late to the party, but this is a fitting and painful tribute to Auron.

Holy... cow...

I can't explain in words how awesome this view on Auron's death is... I'm in shock! I'm reading it again! and again!... and again!

This is one of the best pieces I've ever read. The only critique I have is a few grammatical and spelling errors, which are minor. The story is tight and to the point while still maintaining an astonishing level of amazing detail and imagery.

This is exactly how I would picture Auron in this cicrumstance.

Ho-ly S*. That was amazing, slack-jaw, omg, amazing. Incredible prose and characterization.

Oh my god... that was completely brilliant. I was in awe from the very first pargraph.

That was so... so...

I had a lump in my throat the whole time! That is VERY hard to do, mind you. I loved everything about this fic, it explains... a lot. Even though it is only one chapter long. *winks* I love your stuff, keep it up...

Wow, that was great. _

I love lurking inside Auron, it's fun desu ne?

I loved how you wrote him, it inspires me!

Keep writing, I love it! _

~Skuld-chan

This is so incredible that I'm at a loss for words. You write extremely well, and dig so much deeper into Auron's psyche than I'd ever thought to go...This story is definitely going on my favorites.

Hey, saw this on miri-chan's page, and just had to track you down here too so I could review. I am impressed. You have got Auron DOWN. Amazing bit of characterization, there. Wow.

Damn, Auron is one vet s.o.b. You captured Auron's motivations well.

** brushes tears away ** (it's really sad and heartbreaking)

That was so amazing! Words can't describe how I feel right now!

I loved your story so much that I had to print it out to read over and over again. Wow, what words and imagery! So rich in detail that I can actually visualize Auron in mind.

I hope you write more about Auron (my favourite character from all Final Fantasy games). You have this great ability to go inside that man's mind and to tell us what he is feeling and going through.

Please write more! :)

Great story! Your view on Auron's death is nice and well written.

...I am in silent awe. I bow and kiss your feet! I don't think I'm worthy to read this! All I can say is "WOW!" This story is better than just about anything I could do! It's written extremely well. I don't think there are words to describe the pure greatness of this work! Wow...

Nice story! You portrayed Auron very nicely.

Beautiful piece...great job. You're an amazing author, and I love a lot of your work, but this was just amazing. I've been searching for Auron fics lately, and this is by far the best one out there as far as I've seen. Great description, and getting into Auron's thoughts...you've got a gift for drama and angst. Loved it.