Reviews for Excitement
omgahitsbritt08 chapter 3 . 4/24/2011
The feeling conversation at the end.
springyfly chapter 3 . 5/3/2010
get an imaganary moon going than. the story is very cute and now in my colection of cute and dramatic stories. thanks for writing it
FishNGirl chapter 3 . 11/20/2009
Hi

I really like your story ! Please write a sequel or something else ;) ...please !
Kironomi chapter 3 . 10/12/2009
This is AMAZING!

Even though the last chapter was a bit confusing, I love the way it ended(who wouldn't?XD)

And Marlin's last line...Pf*rolls on the floor laughing*
BlueSpottedDog chapter 3 . 10/10/2009
Can I jump over imaginary moons with you? :)

I loved it!

It was the right mix of angst and smut! :)
CrayonsPink chapter 3 . 9/28/2009
Great job! I really liked it!
FireChildSlytherin5 chapter 3 . 9/25/2009
Great story! :)
Luida chapter 3 . 9/25/2009
Start jumping over your imaginary moons! loved it so good job!
Grace-san chapter 3 . 9/12/2009
Very cute ending! I really enjoyed your story.

You painted the story very well and wrote the characters' feelngs beautifully.

My one comment, it was a little sparatic. Things happened so quickly sometimes and changed so quickly as well. This it is good to write like this to a certain extent, but I think you should spend a little more time elaborating things.

But, other than that, I really found your story charming. (Lol, when did I start talking like that?) It was adourable and meaningful and I loved reading it.

Thank you for writing!
ireadtoomanybooks chapter 3 . 9/12/2009
Heehee... It's so cute *grins* Lovelovelove! More would be fantastic, but it ends nicely here :D
Chidori84 chapter 1 . 9/11/2009
So beautiful! It was really intense. Your writing is amazing. I love the last sentence.
Knight Vigilant Koren chapter 3 . 9/10/2009
so sex with Arthur using some magic would be the best feeing ever then? :P
x-PinkPanther-x chapter 3 . 9/8/2009
OMG Please write more! That was amazing! :O
Tats K chapter 3 . 9/7/2009
Then jump over many more imaginary moons! lol another good chapter! keep it up!
ireadtoomanybooks chapter 2 . 8/29/2009
MI GOSH! Can't wait for more! Oh the tension... Come on Arthur! Realise already... it doesn't matter :P Love it!
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