Reviews for Excitement |
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![]() ![]() ![]() The feeling conversation at the end. |
![]() ![]() ![]() get an imaganary moon going than. the story is very cute and now in my colection of cute and dramatic stories. thanks for writing it |
![]() ![]() Hi I really like your story ! Please write a sequel or something else ;) ...please ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is AMAZING! Even though the last chapter was a bit confusing, I love the way it ended(who wouldn't?XD) And Marlin's last line...Pf*rolls on the floor laughing* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can I jump over imaginary moons with you? :) I loved it! It was the right mix of angst and smut! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great job! I really liked it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Start jumping over your imaginary moons! loved it so good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very cute ending! I really enjoyed your story. You painted the story very well and wrote the characters' feelngs beautifully. My one comment, it was a little sparatic. Things happened so quickly sometimes and changed so quickly as well. This it is good to write like this to a certain extent, but I think you should spend a little more time elaborating things. But, other than that, I really found your story charming. (Lol, when did I start talking like that?) It was adourable and meaningful and I loved reading it. Thank you for writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heehee... It's so cute *grins* Lovelovelove! More would be fantastic, but it ends nicely here :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() So beautiful! It was really intense. Your writing is amazing. I love the last sentence. |
![]() ![]() ![]() so sex with Arthur using some magic would be the best feeing ever then? :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG Please write more! That was amazing! :O |
![]() ![]() ![]() Then jump over many more imaginary moons! lol another good chapter! keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() MI GOSH! Can't wait for more! Oh the tension... Come on Arthur! Realise already... it doesn't matter :P Love it! |