AWESOME!

A fascinating story.

Loved it

This may sound rude and you will probably never read this but I think personally that you ruined the story with Severus and Sasha being together it seemed forced and when they got together you completely dismissed the bond between Severus and wee Sev. And the whole Severus loves Lily but he sees a random muggle that he doesn’t even know and he drops his feelings that been with him since before he went to Hogwarts unrealistic. Other than that I loved the story the other characters had a really nice development and character ark. But yeah Severus and Sasha made my teeth grind and me mad it was forced and pointless.

I know it sounds rude and you will probably never read this but I think personally that you ruined the story with Severus being with Sasha it seemed forced and when they got together you completely dismissed the bond shared between Severus and wee Sev ruining the story for me. And with the whole Severus loves Lily totally but then a random muggle comes along and he drops his feelings seems pretty ridiculous. Other than that I loved the story the other characters had lovely development arks. But yeah Sasha and Severus made me teeth grind and made me mad forced and pointless really.

The most amazing story ever! I knew something was going on between Jethro and Henry. Lol.

Loved it. Thank you for sharing your story.

That was a little chaotic and for most of it i was thinking that there was a too fast paced rhythm. Then i realized that it is in the tv series rhythm, not the book one (or at least that is how i get it ;-) ).
Thank you for sharing

Just finished reading most of what you have posted here. Really sad there's no more! You have some really fun ideas, and I've greatly enjoyed your work!

Bloody loved it I hope you write more stories.

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Excellent story!

Excellent! Everything is as it should be. But who inherits DiNozzo Sr.'s estate?

I am glad Severus has someone and Sasha too. Nice prank on Lucius!

Excellent idea!