AWESOME PLEASE A SEQEUL OR UPDATE SOON

Loved it! Really well written :D

This was great! I thought you captured the emotions of both of them really well and managed to keep it totally in character...

Would love to see this continued!

Great story...

Suzi

I love your story! Especially since Chloe and Scott are obviously the best pairing on the show.

I'm a huge fan of Scott and Chloe! I enjoyed this ficlet! Thanks!

nice one, I like the subtext

This one is good, I hope that you continue it.

I like it! Good work.

I love it and can't wait for more to come. Please update real soon! :)

Nice story, I like it. :)

Wel, that was interesting! Hostile Lt. James indeed! LOL! This could get to be a very interesting "thing" on the show and I like how you wrote the beginnings of it here! Please continue!

nice story. everyone else is writing about rush - glad to see someone else likes chloe/matt :)

I liked this a lot. I've found the growing relationship between Chloe and Scott to be one of the show's most charming elements - a nice, sweet bit of humanity, amidst the darkness and tension of their general circumstance. I think you convey that well here, and I hope it's the first of many stories you write addressing their relationship.

cool story write more

AH YES! Finally a Scott/Chloe fic! loved the story and this was well written-"Scattered and lost in the monsoon of events that had swallowed her whole over the past few days and she’d needed this moment to simply ‘be' "- my fav line. . u r awesome)