Reviews for Unexpected
Kenyatta.harmon16 chapter 20 . 2/2
Please UPDATE. This story was actually pretty good.
Guest chapter 14 . 8/12/2019
at long last!
Guest chapter 12 . 8/10/2019
that is nice of Edward.
Guest chapter 11 . 8/10/2019
that is fine.
Guest chapter 9 . 8/10/2019
that is sad that Jacob would think that!
Guest chapter 5 . 8/10/2019
amazing.
Guest chapter 3 . 8/10/2019
really cool.
Oceanblue1212 chapter 20 . 1/30/2019
Like write sad that you stop. It your story it how u what to be. I like reread it
Guest chapter 20 . 1/15/2019
you said it was completed. I was just ready to read more and it ended. nooooooooooooooooooooooo
Katie.Strawgoh chapter 20 . 6/13/2018
love this story. I enjoy every chapter. Don't let negative reviews get to you. If I could write half as good as you I would write stories myself.
Please don't stop writing this story...I would really like to know how you plan to end this storybut not too fast
Guest chapter 4 . 2/18/2018
Just a bit of feedback, your chapters could be longer so people are more interested, but other than that your story is really good.
skyangel82 chapter 20 . 8/28/2017
Just wondering if you are planning on ever finishing this story? It has soooo much potential and your writing is great!
Sky
yaoilover1992-2010 chapter 20 . 4/8/2017
Update? I like this.
Rebe Marauder chapter 1 . 11/7/2016
Voy a intentar leer esta historia en inglés y dejaré mi opinión
Neville Severus Black chapter 11 . 5/29/2016
I hope you haven't dropped this fic because it's amazing.
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