This is probably one of the worst star wars fics ive read... Mary sue has a bad life so darth vader takes pity on her and makes her his apprentice for no reason whatsoever because hes kills a ton of people and he was evil before he became anakin again, he shouldve just killed her. and you never explained on how she was force sensitive out of all people on earth...

Literally, author-san, you never didnt even do your research, vader wouldve wanted luke to join the dark side, seeing as he was the son of him.

I love women in stormtrooper armor

Update!Seriously, it has been for an eternity!

hey its Ollie, (alec was inspire by me) the fic is... alright, too rushed, and it really needs more environmental description also, the armor alec wears is specifically manolorian, not hunter armor

i read this from the wii

woot! hilarious! great as always!

Pff, let the happy couple be. xD

MOAR PLZ, says nerd.

Awwh, that turned so sad at the end. D: Update soon, great writing.

Aw, so cute . I'm waiting for more.

I finally updated my Adventureland fic, by the way.

Great job as always! Loving the story!

Wow.

I've never been the biggest Star Wars fan but you're such a good writer that I'm ignoring that for now. xD

Awesome.