Love this story! First half of the story I was crying every chapter got a bit confusing with the main plot though but I soughta got it

Oh my god I can't go through one chapter without crying! This is such a great story, if a bit sad, well loads sad

Thank God you didn't really really killed him, because you had me sobbing a couple of chapter ago...

I don't... I totally don't understand the end! I mean, I think I maybe sort of talked myself to a point where I did in fact understand how killing the young Wilbur and then killing the not quite as old as the psycho maniac Wilbur but still super ancient Wilbur fixed the timeline... But whatever. The point is that it worked! Everything turned out okay in the end and that makes me super happy! I have to say, this was one of the best stories I have read for this category! And oh my goodness Wilbur is so freaking adorable! -Promptly shoves fangirl into closet- Anywho, this story was wonderfully complicated and suspenciful enough to leave me wanting more after each chapter! Thanks so much, the best of luck with your future creations! And by creations, I mean stories! ;D

I... there are no words for what you've put me through with this story. I have never cried so much, hell, I cried all through the last chapter, through the happy ending, and am drying my eyes now. I thank you, for bringing so many things to light for me. I just... you've created a whole nother world, you've birthed the most rememberable characters. You've given each word used there own special meaning. So thank you, and damn it you better get this published. (Seriously, just change some of the names and a little bit of the begining so theres no copyright, and go.)

Oh my poptarts! Stop doing this. To us! To our damned feels! I swear I am literally sobbing every other chapter!

Wow. I admit I couldn't see a way for this to end with anything but ultimate sadness but then it did and it makes so much sense. I've no complaints on "but that doesn't explain this" or anything. I don't know if I'll ever read this story again, it's one of those you /must/ read to the end but isn't really nice to just (figuratively) pick up and flip through. And it's so unique that I could hardly forget what happens and re-read it to find out... Anyway, not my normal genre but a very very good read. I see nothing standing between you and a published novel (except perhaps inspiration! those plot bunnies are devilishly tricky little critters!)
God Bless you and your Writing,
Auua Ytjoml

You are wonderful storyteller. If only the story was a little less bleak...
Yeah, I'm fairly sure I'm following everything just fine. You're character's are really well done, AU of course, but very reminisent of the older Sci-Fi books, the ones that have no happy ending (and often no ending at all, just an endless loop) and seem soley designed to make you think.

I was right! Cereus is Wilbur! Somehow that doesn't make me happier. Who is Cerius' brother then?

at first I thought Cereus was a future Wilbur. Now I'm thinking he's something like a super advanced Carl... and of course the alien option is always open...

I knew he was still alive! They didn't need anyone to ID the body, they could have just DNA tested it. The fact that they didn't proves (in my mind) that whoever "they" is didn't WANT the body to be properly IDed or possibly even that there was no body and Cousin (Lazilo was it?) is in on at least part of the plot.

I love this story this is my second time reading it and unlike when I reread other things I didn't skip any part of it. It's just a great story

wow this is good the whole override scene made ne cry but have good feels you know (i dont really know why) but great story so far none the less

This was a really good story. Sure, it was a bit (okay, a lot) confusing, and got pretty dark at the end, and I'm still not too sure about the whole stafford thing (a bit too... weird and out there for me), but it kept the reader's attention the entire time. Not many fics do that.

My only suggestion would be to slow down a bit. It may just be me, but the whole thing (especially the second part) seemed to move awfully fast for my tastes. But then again, I always did enjoy drawing out the inevitable.

I loved the twists you did there at the end. The only one I even saw remotely coming was that "Gentian" was "Cereus's" son, and that was only because of that one hint you dropped with the whole mother/wife thing (can't remember her name). And by the way, I absolutely loved Cereus's whole mad rant. Just confusing enough that he really sounded insane, yet I still got the gist of it (even though it made my head spin). And as for the whole time travel thing, I will have to admit that I've given up on trying to understand that. I tend to over analyze that type of stuff. (must be a side-effect of watching too much Doctor Who!)

I just have one more thing to say. The Scar end of time. It's the Crack! Everybody run for your lives if you want to continue to exist! Lol sorry about that, Doctor Who reference. Couldn't resist. But seriously, as soon as you gave that explanation that is EXACTLY what went through my mind.

That is all.

The first part of the story I liked. The second part was extremely confusing and I'm pretty sure I'm going to need some Asprin.

The whole... starfire thing and its effects seemed way too out there, even if it has something to do with time travel and... ahh, headache.