I was grinning like crazy! (Still am, actually).
Amazing. Fuji i love u.

i love you for writing this

Win, just pure win. I can totally see Fuji doing this. xD

i love it! mary sues should die!

I love you! Seriously, this is total WIN! This story was just brilliant, it's all I can say about it.

Okay, I had trouble reading that...because I was laughing so frickin' hard at nearly every single line. XD You summed up Mary Sues PERFECTLY. I love the excessive description and...her reasons for existence, if "existence" is even the word we should use to describe such abominations of fanfiction.

Anyway, this really made my day. Awesome writing!

Beautiful and cathartic.

Your writing style is hilarious, and you're able to excellently convey our long hatred for the Sue of Mary eloquently.

That being said, try not to stick random A/N notes in the middle of your story. It worked well this time sure, adding to the whole over-the-top satire, but usually its very distracting. Try instead integrating your thoughts into the narrative, or through the dialogue.

Hope to see more from ya!

-Mental Productions

Okay, yes, that was odd! And I loved it! I swear, when you said he leaned forward, I thought she's just faint or something. The reality was so. Much. Better.

Death to the Mary Sues! XD And yes, knives ARE, ahem, 'useful'

LOTRjunkie6,

reading your story, i was immediately reminded of bella from the twilight saga. now, it's not just because Mary Sue-chan's nicky is ella - it's simply because your description of her was a lot like the way stephenie meyer described vampire bella in breaking dawn. although i'm not sure you've read breaking dawn. 0.o

reg your question on ryoma and fuji oocness, i do believe they were both in character. and yeah, i can imagine fuji toting a "useful" knife.

cheers! b.

Oh my gosh! I love how you described her! *insert laughing emoticon here*

This is awesome!

My favourite part was when you describes her...XD You should have mentioned her 'exceedingly amazing tennis skills of awesomeness' too ;) I love this fic~ There should be more mary-sue hating stories out there :D Props to you! _b

My hatred for the MarySue was satisfied when Fuji stabbed her. yes...

I wish there were more Sue-Hate stories