| Reviews for Harry Potter and the Betrayal of Friends |
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   Sylvezar chapter 1 . 5/13 after 10 years of no updates the chance of updates is low |
| steve.moore.9081323 chapter 6 . 1/4 Great looking forward to more |
| superdude50989 chapter 6 . 12/4/2019 Looking forward to more chapters |
| hunzbookwyrm chapter 5 . 9/19/2018 Interesting story so far,hope you get over your block soon. |
| ptrttol1999 chapter 1 . 5/14/2018 Nice effort, but unless you are going for an OOC/unintelligent Hermione, you need to clean up her spoken dialogue. She doesn't use the word 'gonna' when she speaks, she doesn't use the word 'bloddy', etc. |
| Yaw613 chapter 6 . 6/18/2015 Please write next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot. |
| Yaw6113 chapter 5 . 10/8/2014 Please write next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot. |
| Arial Wolf chapter 6 . 9/8/2014 How did they find them as first you stated Ron left the delumonater at the tent then remas gave it to greengrass and now he used it to find them at the house Nice story thank you |
| Yaw6113 chapter 6 . 7/4/2014 Please write next chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot. |
| Still bad chapter 3 . 8/31/2013 PLEASE IMPROVE |
| HatsBrothrs chapter 2 . 8/31/2013 You're writing could use work and Fleur doesn't talk like that. Why would it only be 'arry, what about the rest of the scentence? Would would be 'ould or something else. |
| Mika the Dark princess chapter 6 . 12/6/2012 Lov it...oh no who done knocked harrbear out |
| god of all chapter 6 . 6/14/2012 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
| LatinStoryteller chapter 6 . 5/25/2012 Great Story, but did you abandoned it? |
| ILoveGeorgeEads chapter 6 . 5/19/2011 i loved it.i can't wait for more. |
