aaaaaah perfect :) favorite!

Quite a bit of grammar errors, but...

I, personally, adore this story. It's fantastic. And better yet, it's not an AU. Nice to see some decently written SoKai around here!

Aw. Very simple and sweet. Characterizations are spot on, and the conversation between Sora, Kairi, and Riku was such a perfect representation of their friendship. The scene on the cliff was so sweet!

Hm...what would that make the moon? I've never thought about that before.

Quite nicely written other than a few gramatical errors/typos here and there. The ones that I can remember are:

"as she pulled her knees up to her chest and wrapping her arms around them." should be 'wrapped'

"continuing to pepper me with question." 'questions'

A couple lines down when Sora is talking about Halloween Town, there's a place where there are two commas.

And, finally, that last line, it should be "you're".

Welcome to the KH fandom! A great first KH fic!

-Sunny