Reviews for What're You Trying to Tell Me? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Sooo...I know I'm several years late to this fic, but hey, we only really started talking about fanfiction about a week ago :p And if you can't guess who this is, then you are a silly person...oh wait. By the way, I giggled quite a bit while reading this. Especially the last conversation. Nice job :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeh, had a laugh xD |
![]() ![]() OH PRIMUS! LOLZ! |
![]() ![]() Poor poor hamster. . . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh... I was caught between cackling like a maniac or being horrified... I think you broke my emotions! XD P.S; That's a good thing! :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome story! plz update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I shouldn't laugh at poor Huey's plight but I just can't help it! The bot interactions are so funny! Like Jazz's "NAW. WHEELJACK of course Perceptor!" Then Prowl's retaliation "NO. THE HAMSTER." LOL! I just love the ending banter though :D! Great work loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha! Got a good kick outta this one. X3. I must say, you are a very decent writer. I like the style and the er.."voice" *winks* of yer story. Yeah, you about nailed Jazz's accent, but it's not perfect. Then again, mine I missed a few mistakes, and went w/ it ; You should consider writing a full fleged story (kinda like self) I think it would be a big hit. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LIEK DIS STOREE! That's all I can say for now... Hey, one more thing. Is there really such a video? |
![]() ![]() I am amused. Your job is well done. *Throws a cookie.* :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have been corrupted. Playful brotherly banter between Prowl and Jazz at the end I have thought: are they flirting? Great story. |