Nice One-shot. You really captured the emotion.

Good story I like the song.

Loved it

-icy-

Yaa i was thinking if love drunk for this fic

wowie! very smooth, pretty realistic.

I love that song. In fact, when I read that line I was singing the song. But enough Boys Like Girls fangirling; I enjoyed reading this- mostly because in your writing it shows you successfully graduated from grammar school, and actually tried not to make the English dictionary look foolish. This was a new side of Zoe I haven't seen written about too often.

But I did have a tad problem. Zoe seemed to just get over Hercules (yes I know it's been a few thousand decades) really quickly.

You know you love me,

Bianca

It's a bit early to say "Happy Bastille Day," don't you think? :) Well, it's only three months away and it does take place on July 14th...

Anyway, your grammar was great and you captured Zoe's style of speaking perfectly. It was well-written and interesting. I especially liked the touch of madness you could see in her, since she always seemed to be so with it in The Titan's Curse. I liked how she was talking to Hercules even though he'd been long dead, as if his ghost was haunting her.

Good job and good luck in the contest!

Wow! Excellent! I loved how you portraited her feelings in this one. I personally think Zoë is a though one to achieve that, but you did it!

Great work!

Excuse me for taking so long to review. Now on with the review...

Beautiful. The concept that she loved him and now she hates him. You put the quote into good use,centering the story around that line. Zoë's character and fashion of speaking was captured perfectly. I also liked the bit with Atlas being mentioned here and there. The idea of Hercules messing up her family was a nice touch.

Well done,

PowerofWords12

I thought it was brilliant, the story is really good. At first by talking to Artemis caught my attention and when Artemis mention every certain day she'll do this it really got me curious.

I like how Hercules in not all she thought about. I really like the way you use the reason, she hated him the most because she once love him the most, but also the part because he betrayed her she lost both her love and her family.

I read some stories about Zoe and a lot of them is just about how much she loved him and then hated him, also hating all male heroes. I mean I don't think Atlas was really, really cruel to her. She heard stories from her father about the Titan War and I don't think its because he likes telling the story of how they were defeated. I mean Atlas wouldn't have just told anyone that. And she probably loved her family, but at the time she just love Hercules more and when he betrayed her it was just too late to turn back. I don't think Atlas like the fact that she betrayed him for a son of Zeus. I mean he hate them enough already, they were the ones who got him stuck under the sky.

I also liked the setting of the curse of her father and how she doesn't just hate Hercules. She didn't really hated all her family, but upset about the curse. Also if she completely forgot about him then she wouldn't be like all defensive and never ever speak of him.

I like the story short too, I mean, you don't need many chapters for it to be a good story.

It's kinda a long review, the longest I ever gave to an author, I hope you don't have trouble reading it, lol

Whoa...

Fantastic!

You captured the readers attention with the beginning and expressed Zoe perfectly.

You even got her style of speaking perfectly, some people mess up and overdo it, but this was...great!

I love the idea and how the quote fit in!

Zoe's expressing was very powerful, and so well done that I felt her pain and what she was trying to escape.

Amazing!

~Karina

Brilliant! Not only that but a Zoë story as well, so original! And so much emotion! I can feel the story in my blood, veins, heart and soul. I think you have explained even better that Riordan why Zoë became a huntress.

Love it!

hp