Reviews for Obvious
musicbean2 chapter 16 . 9/18/2019
This fic was so fucking hot, and I loved how in love daniel is with Betty
Jane chapter 11 . 9/20/2014
Hey! I just thought I would say that only having just finished watching ugly betty (I'm a bit late to the party!) I absolutely love your story. I've never felt compelled to leave feedback before, but your story is wonderful and I have really enjoyed it - in fact I've read it a couple of times! I doubt you are going to continue with this as it hasn't been updated for a while - but thanks for writing it I have enjoyed it very much! It's a much nicer way of leaving their love story than the abrupt ending of the show! Thanks again :-)
7gifts chapter 2 . 2/10/2013
I like what you've done here, I can just imagine continuously weighing their interactions against Claire's "I have a theory" and driving herself bonkers in the process.
Betty the Bonita chapter 16 . 11/9/2012
Don't know if you go on here or check your reviews, but I just wanted to say, I re-read this (again), in one sitting. This is of all the detty fics I've read (no small number) my absolute favorite!
I feel like you SO have both their voices down so well. You manage to bring us inside both their heads and hearts and make us catch our breaths in anticipation and excitement right along with them.
Thank you so much for this! I guess where you left things here is a pretty decent ending, but should you decide to do a sequel or at least epilogue, I would LOVE to read it! GREAT JOB!
Betty the Bonita chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
I love this whole story! I've read it so many times. I really like your use of the song here, it's very inventive. You are an awesome writer!
Treble19 chapter 16 . 2/18/2012
really like this! hope you continue
Sin-t-a-h chapter 16 . 2/12/2012
wow that would b soo embarrassing, getting caught by ur family like that
BforMe chapter 16 . 2/11/2012
You just know that would've happened on the show, with the luck those two have! Great chapter. Great talk between Daniel and Ignacio.
Agentcaroline chapter 16 . 2/9/2012
Omg, I would be mortified if my family walked in on me and my husband, lol. That was hilarious. I like how Daniel eventually laughed it off and got Betty to relax. Hilda scolding Justin with that smile on her face made me crack up. I loved the talk between Daniel and Ignacio. Very humorous and touching at the same time. Great chapter!
marielgm22 chapter 16 . 2/9/2012
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww! That was so cute! I love Daniel too! and the way they were caught hilarious! XD

Can't wait to read next chapter!
TMadison chapter 16 . 2/9/2012
So funny. I can't believe Betty's family walked in on them. LOL.
marielgm22 chapter 15 . 2/6/2012
Seriously, the wait was absolutely worth it! The best chapter so far, it was so hot, and romantic at the same time XD

I hope you update more often now, because I can't wait to read next one!
Betty the Bonita chapter 15 . 2/5/2012
Really sexy! I love the shower scene. Very clever the way you are able to get the point across with just two word ! I love making him wait-that's so perfect! Go Betty!
readingfrenzy chapter 15 . 2/4/2012
Yeah! What a wonderful surprise to see that you addeded this chapter. When I read this story, I liked that Betty had teased Daniel about not saying those three words back, but at the same time it did not feel right ending things this way.

Thanks for coming back to the story. Well done!
BforMe chapter 15 . 2/3/2012
You're back! And what a way to come back! Hot dang, Betty's a lucky woman!
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