That was beautiful. But it hurt so much to read! That is so sad! It was bittersweet. Well done. :)

Aw! The sweetest little bite-size fic ever. Like a little bit of angst-fluff for you to swallow and BAM the rest of the week you're smiling like an idiot because Riventhorn

But, I just loved how suble it was. You're reading and reading and suddenly you're heart is bursting out of your chest like cranberries what happened oh yeah Merthur.

"Hmmm, perhaps not entirely." Arthur sat down next to Merlin, nudging him over a bit so there was room.

:) Perfect.

Lexi

okay taht was too cute!

It's perfect. The expression is amaing, and it's so moving :(

XX

aww...poor Merlin-I'm glad he's still got Arthur to comfort him

Such a sad fic, but I love how you wrote Merlin and Arthur's interactions! The last line was sweet though! Thanks!

I like this.

This is a lovely story, sweet, sad, moving, very nicely written.

I can imagine something like this happening after Gaius passes on.

That was really sweet, I loved it.

Aww. Cute plus short but sweet. You never cease to come up with some rather interesting plots. I find your style a tad undefined but enjoyable. It's writers like you that give me a sense that pace has changed, if but a little. Your stories seem to act as a relief from some of the more detailed ones. Although, detail is always key. But with yours, detail doesn't seem to matter, or come into play. Don't worry, I'll accept that for now.

Next time you write something, you're welcome to get my opinion before you post it. I'd love to see if detailing things in a story is really in your blood.

Later,

Blue

Very well written. I feel sorry for Merlin. It made me sad. You did such an awesome job, and that I am happy about.

Poor Merlin...This was written very well-you captured the emotions of the charecters very well. Great job!