| Reviews for KOKOMO |
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   Ahsurika chapter 1 . 4/1/2019 well go and break my heart for the vorcha, why dontcha This fic is absolutely incredible |
| The Apocryphal One chapter 1 . 11/15/2018 Wow. Beautiful and tragic, an excellent in-depth depiction of a usually flat race. I genuinely got attached to Keesh and his controlled-but-wild personality, his struggles, his hate; I kept hoping things would get better and that end broke my heart. Just beautiful. |
| thetyrant67 chapter 1 . 7/27/2018 I love this story but what does KOKOMO mean? Sorry if that went right over my head. |
| Jaal Ama Darav chapter 1 . 2/1/2016 A very good interesting story that looks into one of the less known alien races in Mass Effect. |
| DragonsDeadAndDancing chapter 1 . 12/18/2015 This was a punch in the gut. And it was awesome. You're as excellent as a writer as you are as an artist! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/7/2015 Great story |
| kittyribs chapter 1 . 5/30/2014 Holy shit that was the most unexpectedly heartbreaking thing I have ever read. Five stars and an A for you, friend. Jesus Christ. |
| HVK chapter 1 . 1/12/2014 A genuine and very well-written tearjerker that really shows WHY the vorcha would have wanted everyone else to choke and die. Poor people... |
| AnAncientBard chapter 1 . 11/9/2013 And now I feel bad for all the vorcha I killed... 10/10 Very good, very unique. |
| harmonyfb chapter 1 . 11/1/2013 Wow. That was fantastic. I love that with this short piece you opened up an entire backstory for what was clearly just a throwaway reference. :) |
| Drunk1nD0nuts chapter 1 . 8/3/2013 Wow...this is an incredible one-shot. You really captured what it meant to be 'alien', and executed it beautifully. You gave depth to an alien race that is presented as extremely one-dimensional in the games, and really make the reader think about whether they are just mindless vermin, or something more. This was a fantastic fic, a 10/10. Good work! |
| Orifiel chapter 1 . 6/25/2013 First perspective of a vorcha I've ever read, and I was blown away. You wrote Keesh's life, family, recruitment, and end with amazing emotional impact. Your prose was perfect for his perspective, and the entire story flowed very well. I saw nothing to criticize. This was brilliant. |
| Solidstach chapter 1 . 3/12/2013 A new, interesting perspective. For some reason I am reminded of Jack London's "White Fang". Well written typical life of a Vorcha. Nice one-shot. |
| A Dozen Lemmings chapter 1 . 3/11/2013 That was one of the saddest things I've ever read... I sorta want a Vorcha Squad mate now. |
| drinkurmilk chapter 1 . 2/11/2013 This fanfic led to the creation of this account. Fanfic is uncharted terrain for me, and I've been quite cautious of delving into it until I stumbled upon this. I applaud this compelling, original, inspired story-storytelling and I hope there is more to come. Doubts remain as to whether anything else of this substance exists in the Mass Effect fandom. |
