Reviews for Fun in the Sun
Zion S. Rachett chapter 1 . 8/21/2014
I simply love it when Sabertooth warms up the the children, it looks like he's going soft :D.
FeralsRock chapter 1 . 2/1/2011
SOUNDS LIKE VICTOR HADD A GOOD TIME
Writer Under The Stairs chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
Awesome
GrimlockX4 chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Oh my goodness, the way you had Magneto and the Acolytes suffer was totally priceless! XD LOL
RogueFanKC chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
[quote]

"Hey! A shipping freighter just ran aground a mile down the beach! The hull's cracked and it's spilling out over six thousand cases of beer!"

"WHAT?" Every male within hearing distance yelped.

"FREE BEER!" Several beachgoers were nearly trampled as the herd of guys ran for the alleged freighter and its cargo.

[/quote]

I'm actually surprised that the men were THAT stupid to fall for that, although I give you a lot of credit CF! you made me laugh out loud again in the office, and now my coworkers are looking at me strangely.

Ah, the wonderful irony of all the Acolytes being fancied except Remy was gold, although I have comment that between Remy and Piotr, though Remy is more charming, Piotr is the more attractive of the two.

Remy: Oh shut up.

And wow, even Magneto got some female admirers? That's actually hilarious and genius! Hey, Magneto needs some lovin' if you think about it (granted, they could be less crazy, but that's his luck). And yes, Sabertooth burying Kelly in the sand was wonderful.

And I'm impressed by Pyro; he quickly sees that the best way to a girl's heart is through her stomach. I heartily approve. Along with the second cameo by Denise. )

And now I'm all caught up! Sorry it took me so long to review everything, but I'm glad to see you're still writing wonderful Acolyte humor! Continue soon! )
Swirl-spill chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
Oh Remy. It seems you have competition. But I'm still kinda finding Magneato as one of the candidates hard to swallow. Great story!
Mini Wolfsbane chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
Bwhahaha! Remy torture! I can't help but love it, even if I am

a crazy Gambit Fangirl. (I've been known to torture him a tiny

bit myself in my 'fics too.)

Piotr womencute and funny.

Heck, it was all good.

It's going in my faves list. Can't wait for the next one.
Meow chapter 1 . 7/21/2010
ahahahaha! Love it!

I'd totally fawn over PyroXDD
0HeartShapedBox0 chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
Oh my goodness, where do I start with this one? Like all your stories this wasone of the funniest things I've ever read. Denise is plain hilarious when she goes on her murderous rampages with Remy, Sabretooth is helping little children, Piotr and Mags are getting chased by women and Pyro is being his usual, hyperactive, hilarious self. This story was AWESOME and I hope more come out soon!
New Dawn Rising chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Oh wow, that was hilarious, as usual! All Remy needs is Rogue to defend him, or would she stand and laugh? Everyone can get a woman except for him. XD
Chellerbelle chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Oh poor Remy and his bruised ego (amongst other things) hahaha. I like how Sabretooth sorted the situation to suit himself too. Piotr and Mags trying to running away from the women was hilarious and I loved Pyro just living it up.

Good work!
TheBlueFoxtrot A Samba chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
LOL You're so mean! I like you
Red Witch chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
He he! That is so funny! I love this! Great one shot!