Great story :)

Ah, such a sad ending, but that's Jerza.
I just hope Mashima makes them happen. It would be so sad not to.
Great job with this! You really are talented :D

Sad, and amazing. Amazingly sad?

Sad. As hell. Why Hiro Mashima? Why you must torture us like this? Not fair :(

That was sweet. It's sad she had to leave, but I loved their 'moment'. Great story, and I'd love to see more.

All of these Gerza fics are so sad T-T

*sighs* If only this actually did happen...*sniffles*

Good work on this! XP

me encanto

This is one of the saddest stories I have yet to read... and it's one of the best JellalxErza fics I've read so far... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

*sad smile* Great work! You made me smile. Sadly.

That was good, and maybe just a tiny bit sad, on Jellals half.

Aww D:)

I really like how you made a link to Erza's "at least in my dreams I would be free to run to your side line" on one of the chapter covers. Was that intentional? It fair was, hey, and it was really awesome! Well done with this :D

Awwwwwwwww I love this pairing so much...

You made me cry.

The only mistakes that appear are the inconsistent verb tenses, but other than that, pure angst and sadness that tugged at my heart.

But, hey, great job! Although it was short, it was full of emotion and the last line was a great finish.

-nell