Wow...

I just...

It was really... hard.

It really breaks my heart. I feel really bad and break... wow...

I'm just in love with this. You're really awesome and wonderful.

Ohmy... When i first read this...i thought it was shorter and sadder...

I like this one more!

I love this!

This is so raw and so broken and everything that it is. And, oh dear, this is making a very painful lump form on my throat.

I have always loved imperfections. Loved stories about how things are broken and torn yet everything is still so PERFECT and I love it when it's the flaws that make it flawless.I so so love everyone here. Everyone is so perfect and so real and my god why is this so heartwrenching?

This is wonderful, YOU are wonderful, and I've read your other stories and they are so wonderful and just sweet.

Definitely an amazing story, well written, and heart-wrenchingly stunning. A perfect view into a band who didn't make it, and four boys who are slowly but surely breaking. I can see this happening because I've seen it happen before, in real life. And it's true. It's so true. And the emotion is true. And I like your ending, because not everything is perfect (because we've learned, nothing is perfect, nothing can become perfect), but things are better, and they'll heal with time, and with Kendall. In my life when this happened, the ending wasn't nearly as good. There's no talking, and there's still resentment and hate and we're still broken (and not in the perfect way), and the love like a mint- we've had a bit of it but swallowed it too quickly and now all that's left is the slightly bitter taste of wanting something you can never have. This story is almost like the closure I've never gotten.

So thank you.

Holy cow. Mind blown. This was so raw and real and it hurt to read and I'm crying right now but it doesn't matter because I love this story. It felt like my heart was shattering, and I love that. I wish it didn't have to end. It was so amazing and awesome and all those other words. Thank you for such an amazing story!

Awwwww I'm crying! why dies it have to end? That was so beautiful :,)

Wow...that was intense and real and raw and just...wow...I almost never cry reading but this had me streaming tears. I'm haunted in the very best way by all of it. Stunning. -Atticus

That was amazing! I don't even know how to describe the sheer level of awesome that is this story. It was dark and hauntingly beautiful. It was a different interpretation of their personalities, but I think it is still very fitting. And the story idea was so original.