Reviews for The Surprise Visitor
MSBlackmon chapter 1 . 7/12/2015
I really love that couple, and I think your writing style and abilities are doing it justice.
kt5299 chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
I loved it its one of those storys that you could write 20 chapters of, and change as much as you want,and people will still want to read every word so you snhould definately write more. :)
PrincesaKory chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
AIIIIII MEU DEUS! Q LINDOOOOOOOOO... AMEIIIIII... PQ VC PAROU? TO APAIXONADA... AHHHHHHHH... CONTINUEEEEEEE... MUUUUUUUUUUI8TO BOOOOOOAAAAA SUA FIC... TO APAIXONADA DE VERDADE VERDADEIRA... KISSUS 3 (Y)
Ninetailsjinx chapter 1 . 11/28/2012
I really, really liked this, both for the writing style and for the story, but I'm super sad it's only a one-shot because it sounds like this could be a fantastic series.
tragedymaster01 chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
So perfect! Need sequel!
The Great Leap of the Fall chapter 1 . 4/20/2011
I really wish this was longer because I really enjoyed the story! Good job!