I do like the ending of this story, the beginning and the middle too :) I like the thought of the Flack/Jo friendship thing - sometimes it may be easier to talk to someone you don't know that well kinda vibe. I also love the scene where Danny and Flack go for that guy - their faces are priceless as they put their guns away and run at him...anyway lol I think you did a great job here :)

I really liked this-I like Jo a lot, though I miss Stella. And Flack is my favorite character on the show. :) Really good story!

I like this pairing, and I think you did a fantastic job with it. You should definitely write more with these two :)

This is the third time I've read this story. I love it that much! I agree that Don and Danny getting tossed around would have resulted in the need for some TLC.

Loved your story! Thank you for sharing!

As I said in my review of Chapter 1, I am glad someone took these stories somewhere. I really think you captured the essence of the characters involved. The dialogue was ttrue to form.

Good story, there's not many flack stories out there that don't involve romance. Bit disappointed there wasn't a bit more to the Danny / Flack injury chapter but loved the story all the same. (Have even added it to story Favourites so i can read it again)

Well Done

Awww... a sweet story; keep up the good work.

I was wondering if someone was going to give us something from Don's POV because of last week's episode. HE was phenomenal in it! These two lines are PERFECT!

"Flack shrugged. "Well, sometimes it's harder to ask for help that to deal with stuff on your own…"

Jo smirked. "Correct me if I'm wrong, but it looks like this is not a matter of asking for help, but to accept the help that's being offered…"

LOL, she hit that one on the head! There is nothing more that Don could have done, Bobby is going to be fine. I doubt there is a jury that would want to convict him especially after all of the evidence about the people trying to kill him was in. I love how she was there for him, Jo is awesome in this story.

I like it! I love the dynamic between Jo and Mac: they talked about Flack's past but it didn't seem forced. It just came naturally. I'm really curious to read next chapter. Maybe Jo's going to pay a friendly visit to our fav detective?

This was very good - very in character and well written! I hope to read more of your work!

I'd definitely like to read more of this. I have a feeling that not many people on fanfiction have accepted the whole stella leaving jo coming in thing well, and I'm actually quite intrigued by her. It's always interesting to see a new perspective from someone outside of the original characters. Please keep going!

love this!

Do you know, I'm probably crazy, but right from the first episode I've seen Don adn Jo together.

:) Good stuff! Keep writing!