Reviews for park that car, drop that phone, sleep on the floor |
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Guest chapter 1 . 5/24/2018 kudos |
countingthestars12 chapter 1 . 2/18/2014 Wow this was so beautifully written! I loved the way you wrote Blair and Dan. Their relationship is so easy to caricature, yet you wrote them with such nuance, grace, and realism. And I think you're one of the only authors - if not the only author - I've read on this site who has succeeded in writing a mistletoe scene without it being totally cheesy. You did a great job at characterizing Blair's thoughts and Dan's actions - again, very easy to caricature if not handled by a talented author. I loved the dialogue, and I just love the way you wrote the story - revealing just the right amount so that we feel all of the conflicted emotions that Dan and Blair share - the friendship and camaraderie, the banter and chemistry, the longing, the heartbreak, the boundaries - without all of those things being too obvious or sappy. Clearly, I loved this piece. Great work! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2014 Adorable and romantic |
Into-Your-Gravity chapter 1 . 5/27/2013 This is perfection. |
TanyaKay chapter 1 . 9/9/2012 3 |
enemeriad chapter 1 . 7/26/2012 this was so beautiful! a wonderufl way to end the story and they were both really well in character. |
Mrs Crawford Badgley chapter 1 . 10/6/2011 I wish we could have actually seen what they did over the break when they were the only two in the city...so this is perfect. The mistletoe was a good touch but I loved how they didn't kiss because of it! Like their first kiss should be on their own terms... now I'm ranting so I'll just move on to the next Dair Fic |
toomuchchampagne chapter 1 . 8/17/2011 Well-written, poetic. That's exactly how I see Dair. |
Xx starlight-moon xX chapter 1 . 5/29/2011 Love it. Blair shushing Dan when he hasn't said anything, wondering what he's writing, the mistletoe! It's all perfectly judged, and downright adorable. Well done! :) |
fayespiegel chapter 1 . 5/9/2011 How you manage to write such sweet interactions without making them out of character and find a way to turn what is usually otherwise a very cliched element of forced romantic expression into something incredibly original (the mistletoe scene) is BEYOND me. You are AMAZING, and I feel incredibly lucky to have stumbled across your stories. You are a TREMENDOUS talent. Keep up the phenomenal work. :) |
forgot my password chapter 1 . 3/20/2011 I'm not even going through the Dan/Blair list anymore. Just reading all of yours. :) |
Dulcedecorumest chapter 1 . 3/15/2011 This was so well-written and just gorgeous. There is something very... I wanna say Spencer Tracy and Katherine Hepburn about these two. Always has been. You capture it well. |
ammaarah333 chapter 1 . 2/15/2011 Awesome! :D You should totally continue... Since you doo have gOod feedback. It would be an awesome story |
A True Dreamer chapter 1 . 2/3/2011 I heart this! I dream of a world were they could try too! |
perfangel5655 chapter 1 . 1/27/2011 such a beautiful story! Do you plan to continue? |