Oh my, it seems I've fallen in love with this story and the way you've written these characters! What a breathtakingly stunning cliffhanger! I cringe at Shinji's betrayal aaaaaah-! I thought for sure he'd be on Rika and Dark's side! Or at least point out how fearful Rika was to her father and possibly shed light on her escape- but no matter! I love it nonetheless! :D

There are few and far between well-written DN Angel stories, which is troubling, but yours is brilliant! Here's to hoping we see more of Dark and Rika!

-DMRA

THIS IS AMAZING STORY

iam very excited about this story please let there be more chapters coming

this is awesome :)

please keep this story going :)

this are amazing chapters i hope there will be more DNAngel stories coming cause lately DNAngel Fanficiton seems that there not enough stories and the pairs like Dark and Rika and Dark and Riku and Dark and Risa and Dark and Tower and other different pairs as well to read on :(

this is amazing i hope there will be 100 chapters coming for this story :)

will there be more updates coming cause i want to read more of this story :D

this is going to be awesome story i know it and please keep this story going :D

very interesting. i like it and will read more if you write more.

SHINJI! YOU B******! Yay, so happy you updated! This is a difficult fandom to write for sometimes, but we struggle along, ne? Delighted to see you again! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Much love, Princess Kanako x

You updated already! Happy happy, joy joy, happy happy, JOY!

I've got to figure out how you make a simple walk to school so engaging. I feel I've been hypnotized by this story. It's just so beautiful. The words hold so much beauty in the images they paint. And it all just flows...right into pinning emotion. It's fantastic how each character just pops with their own energy. It's all so vivid and the storyline is just so tantalizing! Why did you end on such a cliffy? This clash is not going to turn out well, is it? I've got a bad feeling, especially for Rika.

...WOMAN!

This is amazing. And ARG.

Oh. My. God.

I love it. There is no other way to explain how I feel about how you're writing this other than.. I love it. I love how you're writing Krad and Dark. I love how you're actually making me adore (somewhat) Rika and how she and Dark were together. Everything about this story, I love.

Keep it up and I can't wait to read more! :D

You really bring out Krad's seemingly bi-polar nature. And yet you catch something extraordinary about him. Wonderful, wonderful writing. I felt so much, not just during the angels' terrible fight, but throughout the whole chapter. I'm an NOT one for romance, but that might just change with the way you're writing it. _ Such lovely visions you bring to mind with your words, with emotions to match. It's deep and refreshing. Thank you for this update. I'm glad I got to read it.