I'm literally speechless.
Whoa.
Dude.
Dark.
Whoa.
What happened to my adorable FACE family?
I hope Francis is alright.

Please update soon oh my god this is amazing!

how about a seqyel :3

Gasp! Please write more!

Please continue this story!

please continue. I'm begging you, I don't want it to end like this!

I can't help but feel sorry for poor Francis, and wonder just what in the world Matthew did to him. Sounds like he gave him some sort of drug but that may just be me misinterpreting things. xD

I'm anxious to see what happens next. oAo

Ahaha, Alfred as a cross between Sealand and Prussia. So true! I never thought about that.

And dang. Now i wanna know if he's really dead or not. I mean...he's a country...a couple toxic drugs couldn't kill him right?...RIGHT?

God...how horrible would the world be without it's favorite pervert? Jeez...and HE HAD FRIENDS!

I didn't get to finsih my review. I hit 'enter' too soon...whoops...

There are a few more reasons why none of the countries could develop Freudian complexes, but i think you get my point...

anyway, i just wanted to say that i really DO like this story. And it doesn't have to make logical sense since it's fanFICTION. I understand this, and i'm not trying to be a bitch... It's an awesome idea and you made it really dark and shocking. so, i'm really sorry if i offended you.

Btw, i love your writing style. You don't make your paragraphs too long, and the sentences flow nicely.

GOOD JOB

ONWARD TO CHAPTER 2!

This story is awesome in a creepy way. And, i'm guessing it's a hypothetical thing, since Alfred and Matthew could never develop Oedipus complex for Arthur...for a few reasons.

1. Arthur is a male, and isn't their real 'mother'. The Oedipus complex is Frude's creation, basing off the belief that the mother is the first 'love-object'.

2. Oedipus Complex is developed before the age of 2 because the child has a temporary oral-fixation from breast-feeding. (oral-fixation is when all desires are centered to the mouth. That's why a lot of kids suck their thumbs. It's an auto-erotic object) Since Arthur could have never breast-feed either one of them, they would've never even developed oral-fixation.

This entertainingly interesting. The story is unique and very original. Also, I couldn't help but love the way you write. It's so exquisite!

I hope that you will update it soon. I was immediately engrossed and I can't wait to know what will happen next. You will continue this, right? :3

If ever you do, I will patiently wait for the next chapter. :3

Happy writing! :)

The first chapter creeped me out, sending a chill down my spine. The twins were scary! Alfred's over-possessiveness of Arthur was imaginable all right, but Matthew's was downright shocking me. I'm quite relieved now after chapter two. At least, Arthur found Francis and with the presence of Gilbert and Antonio the twins wouldn't harm either of their parent-figures. But, I'm dying to know what would happen then?

These two chapters were amazing- psychologically and emotionally. It's such a breath fresh of air, this story. Whether or not it's continued, it's still a great piece. (though I do hope its continued!) Thanks! C:

All those weeks of studying the Oedipus Complex paid off! I can proudly say that I understood the title as soon as I laid my eyes on it. And it's safe to say that Alfred and Matthew are seriously fucked up, bro. Francis would never leave Arthur~

I just hope they get what's coming for them; I fucking hate it when people try to mess with someone else's relationship. Mmmmhhhhm, I love your story!

Yes! Sequel!

I like how Alfred and Mathew actually feel like they've done something wrong, but then try to push it aside. I pictured them kidnapping Arthur or something and taking him to some secluded place i.e. Mathew's home (because who would even know where Mathew lives besides America, England, France, and maybe Cuba?)

Good story, I hope you don't leave me hanging here!