God I forgot how much I loved all your ac stories. I've been having a very bad week, so I went back and read almost all of them. It helped so much.

wow, i really like this story! i dont read assassins creed sotries at all, and even then i dont read these somewhat longer stories often either because it requires commitment, but im happy i read this. i thought the end to this story was fitting :)

I am delighted about it.

Great story! I love Malik, he's such a great character. Though I do wonder what he thought when Altair brought Maria back with him after his mission in Cyprus.
Anyway, great work!

Some brilliant dialogue in there, truly.

Also came here from DA and it was absolutely worth it. Haven't read a FF like yours in years and I'm writing myself for 15 years now. It's so good to see all these little details and hints, we all could now from the games, put together in this awsome way or yours. The way you let there delicate relationship grow over all the issues is so fantastic. The dialogues so well adjusted and every word set so carefully... I simply love it

Hey :D

Great story! Really! I like it how you show all the problems and all the mess, Al Mualim left behind. And the deep trust Malik and Altair shared after these events.

I really like the last part I like everything...

Thank you for this masterpiece!

Hikari

Wonderfully detailed story. I enjoyed every minute.

Lovely story! You did an amazing job on Malik's character, and it was a fun, insightful read. :) Altaïr is my favorite as well. :3

Hey, I came here from doubleleaf's picture on dA and... I don't know what I was expecting from your story, but you certainly have exceeded all expectations I could've had.
It was really refreshing reading something where Altair is not an illiterate *novice* in comparison to Malik, but rather his equal and a brilliant mind of his own. And the way you describe the development of the relationship between the two up to that awesome (!) ending somehow just felt ...right. )

Great story! :D I really, really like it.

:) :D

There are no words to describe this. Pure talent.

Great story. Really appreciate how you showed the order flourishing between Altair and Malik, but some differences still remain. Such as, what to do with the apple and it's use. The idea that in the end Altair lets Malik in, so to speak, and gives him the highest honour he is able.

This was so marvelous! You portrayed Altair and Malik perfectly, and I love the deep bond of friendship they possess. I think you kept this epilogue to AC very realistic and very accurate, and I'm awed by your skill. Well done.

(I was directed to this story by *doubleleaf's art)

-The Flamekeeper